Recent Comments

3/22/26, 7:20 AM
I'm not a huge fan of battle scenes, and this chapter was almost all battle. They tend to be kind of one note and boring. But I have to hand it to NeonDemon, this was amazingly creative and vivid. And from a narrative perspective, it needed to happen. It was pretty cool getting to see so much of it from Dauntless' perspective, see how his power works, and confirm that yes, he's as shitty a person as all the other members of the Tribunal. It was also great to see Jamie coming into his own, and battling the League's best fighter to a standstill. It was also good to see Dusk and Onyx getting along, for a change. Now, what will being "brand new" mean for Jamie when he wakes up? And how will he adjust to life under Master's thumb?
Binder
3/21/26, 6:08 PM
Love how you set this up. The Bat being dominated/controlled by his beefy ass. A new twist on bondage.

3/22/26, 6:19 AM
@Binder Thanks Bro. Glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate the comments.
Babooner
3/14/26, 10:19 PM
Hot as fuck.

3/22/26, 6:18 AM
@Babooner Hey man, Thanks!
3/12/26, 9:45 PM
Easily the best story on the site, Congratulations

3/22/26, 6:18 AM
@[perseussw1](/user/show/10029764) Thanks buddy. I appreciated that.
Gr8
3/9/26, 6:57 AM
So hot. The bat collared by his own ass. Nice job, man. 🔥🔥🔥

3/22/26, 6:16 AM
@Gr8 Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.
QueerBoi
3/5/26, 4:22 PM
Outstanding chapter, Sir. More please.

3/22/26, 6:16 AM
@QueerBoi Thanks QB.
Mar 7, 2026
3/22/26, 5:06 AM
i keep coming back to this story. i hope there is a version where the straight guy is the bottom.
3/22/26, 2:17 AM
This chapter was awesome. Such dynamic and high stakes fights that were so well written. Qapla'!
3/22/26, 12:54 AM
I'm thinking, maybe being Daddy's little bitch isn't such a bad thing after all...mmmmm...!

3/22/26, 1:12 AM
@[mikegay4u-1](/user/show/451349) Haha..tru dat huh
3/17/26, 11:35 PM
I’m so happy you wrote another part to this story. I hope there will be more.
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3/22/26, 12:58 AM
@[tanners92](/user/show/963694) There will definitely be more. Picture two sluts on Route 66. Clark will be in the passenger seat whispering in Steve’s ear. Steve slips further into control and domination.

3/22/26, 1:02 AM
@[DadisTopped](/user/show/10031852) Woof. I hope other tops will become slutty bottoms :)