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11/3/25, 7:15 PM
I came soo hard to this!
11/1/25, 8:49 PM
OMG, that was sooo hot.

11/3/25, 2:05 AM
@[MindlessDog](/user/show/10009228) I'm glad you think so 😁

11/3/25, 1:46 PM
@[Anderson Gaze](/user/show/10000803) Let's have a sequel :D

11/3/25, 5:17 PM
@[MindlessDog](/user/show/10009228) So I was toying with the idea of rewriting it to have more volunteers, and write a series that follows each of them through the night. So that might happen.

11/3/25, 6:56 PM
@[Anderson Gaze](/user/show/10000803) I really like the muscled himbo guy slipping into the mind of a Gorilla - basically by being challenged to be imaginative and give a good show. I actually first thought that Nate knew what would happen at the show, brought the costume on purpose and would expose the rude meathead as a naked ape man :D
Anonymous
11/3/25, 6:08 PM
Loved it! Hope you enjoyed writing it as much as we did reading it!
hauntedestheart
11/3/25, 7:05 AM
Loved this! Such a creative use of the medium (I cannot imagine how much work it must have been to get all this together) and quite sexy, definitely my favorite of the stories in the Halloween contest. The only thing I'm left wondering about was the other ghosts in the house who were possessing the objects the various William variants... who were they and where did they come from? Was that explained and I just missed it?

11/3/25, 4:21 PM
@hauntedestheart I'm so glad you liked it! Three weeks of intense writing and a bit of time off work (though helped with a broken toe) was how I did it. The other ghosts are certainly left a bit nebulous. Chapter 5's William version covers it a little with the sad violin backstory, but not much further than that. The primary reasons for not talking about them further are (a) There simply wasn't space in this much longer-than-anticipated story to also address the backstory of 6+ more ghosts / characters. And, (b) I didn't think they were too important to the main story; they serve their purpose of possessing, changing a few physical features (or magnifying), and certainly influencing the action. In other words, for purposes of this story, they were a plot device rather than important characters themselves. With that said, there is certainly room for a spin-off or side-chapters in the future.
Anonymous
11/3/25, 3:46 PM
Please keep going, I love this story.
pmk
11/3/25, 3:40 PM
Loved this story! Glad to see you writing again and I hope you’ll continue.
11/2/25, 7:48 AM
A fascinating take on The Count of Monte Cristo, and an excellently written one too. The prose here really felt as though it was ripped straight from a novel of that era. Fantastic work!

11/3/25, 3:02 PM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) Thank you so much! I really wanted the prose to sound like something from that era, just with a darker, more sensual twist. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
10/27/25, 4:56 PM
Not bad at all. Some of the changes imposed were a bit obvious and the opening was more montage than story but it made sense for the intended tale of vengeance. The actual Count of Monte Cristo was a son's fan-fiction of his father's life. The biography of Dumas, famous in Napleon's army as The Black Count, one of his best generals, can be found under that name. The story (The Count of Monte Cristo) is a bit more fiction than history but Dumas himself was a lot more of a story come to life.

11/3/25, 3:01 PM
@[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) Thanks for the feedback! The montage-style opening was a way to adapt the story to the erotic transformation theme without making it too long. I wanted to condense Dantès’s journey and set the tone for what follows. And yes, Dumas’s life—and his father’s—could fill another novel entirely.
11/1/25, 10:48 PM
Oh you accidentally didn't link this to the rest of the series. You need to contact a site administrator to have it moved over.

11/2/25, 8:37 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Thanks for noticing that. I have no idea how this happened, as LockedPig seemed not to have done anything wrong. Somehow, a new series with the same name got created, and it wasn't easy to sort it out. However, it now appears that all three chapters are correctly assigned to the same series.

11/2/25, 2:18 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thank you!!!

11/3/25, 2:44 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Yeah I'm glad I noticed and figured out what was going on, especially with it being a contest story.
11/3/25, 10:37 AM
I'm looking forward to the continuation, the idea is interesting, but I hope the chapters will be much more voluminous and rich in character action.

11/3/25, 11:52 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) The customer is always right. The second part, which I have already written, is of course similar to the first, but I will write the new ones longer.