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6/19/25, 7:51 PM
I love it.
6/19/25, 6:15 PM
Loved this. Can't wait for Cooper to turn bad
Tanner
6/15/25, 9:16 PM
I agree with Edlam. Amazing story. So fucking good. Please keep writing.

6/16/25, 9:39 PM
@Tanner Thank you so much. I'll do my best (what would you want me to write about after reading this one?)

6/17/25, 4:53 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) First of all, kudos on a wonderful story. I think it's a great submission for this contest, and I'm excited to read pretty much anything you write after this. I would love to see a further exploration of Milo's relationship with the professor. Who really runs the show? Is there a sexual component, or do they share a purely academic interest in exploring this project? I would also love to see some further interactions between the students. Going from the camaraderie of being on a team to possible competition as they try to be the next man to join the harem. How do the men treat each other in Milo's absence? I loved the scene with Alex serving as a bouncer for a public bathroom, and I'd like to see more of that.

6/17/25, 2:26 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) The coach

6/18/25, 10:59 AM
@[Zing](/user/show/10040385) Oooh, I didn't really go into the coach, what kind of character should he be (gruff, hot, muscular, slim...)?

6/18/25, 11:04 AM
@[Chesire cat](/user/show/10001871) Thank you for the kind comment! Oh wow, jocks competing for their twink master...it almost writes itself! Part of me thinks what works about the professor is how little we know about him...makes him creepier...but the archetype is something I'd want to explore more in different stories. Thanks again!

6/19/25, 5:16 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Gruff muscular but in the end more submissive than the teammate , maybe? Or even as Marcus’s little toy
Sucker
6/19/25, 4:44 PM
White sissy male here would love to suck many black cocks , swallowing all their hot juices one in my mouth one in my ass coming at the same time = heaven , next please.
6/19/25, 4:33 PM
If not more parts, what other stories would this author recommend?
Anonymous
6/19/25, 2:55 PM
As much as I hate asking, but please tell me if there will be a happy ending?

6/19/25, 3:47 PM
@Anonymous I think you'll have to keep reading for that. They want to help him, but you have to want help sometimes.
6/19/25, 2:31 AM
Not as good as the first part of this story. I agree that some of the word choices have a repetitive nature. You do have a good rhythm to your writing. I can see that you've put in a lot of effort, too, which is worth noting beyond the constructive feedback.

6/19/25, 1:21 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) I really appreciate your feed back. Thank you very much.
6/19/25, 12:45 AM
"On the other hand" kept on repeating over and over, and at one point, Tom was wearing panties? Was this an AI assisted story, or maybe a language barrier?

6/19/25, 1:19 PM
@[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) My apologies. I should have check it more. Be asured I didn't use AI to generate it. I guess I just wanted to publish as soon as possible. It'll try to be more cautious in the next stories. Thanks for the feed back.
6/19/25, 12:57 PM
OMG….. really wish I’d read this earlier. Such a massive piece with so much detail. Definitely turned me on.
6/18/25, 5:26 AM
this reminds me of a nice story I read here a while back. Sadly it was never finished. If I recall correctly it was that one of the 3 weavers (usually portrait as 3 Sisters) went rougue and started affecting the humans in a way that wasnt allowed. I wish that story would eventually get finished

6/18/25, 5:52 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) That was a story called The Right Path by Promethol. It's one of my favourites but, as you say, it was left unfinished which is a shame because it was a great premise.

6/18/25, 6:41 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) I had the same thought as well! And just when hope was finally found

6/18/25, 2:30 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) This story is an homage to that story. It was one of my favourites and so sad it never got the conclusion it deserved!

6/19/25, 11:43 AM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) That's awesome and low key wholesome