As much as I hate asking, but please tell me if there will be a happy ending?

Not as good as the first part of this story. I agree that some of the word choices have a repetitive nature. You do have a good rhythm to your writing. I can see that you've put in a lot of effort, too, which is worth noting beyond the constructive feedback.

"On the other hand" kept on repeating over and over, and at one point, Tom was wearing panties? Was this an AI assisted story, or maybe a language barrier?

OMG….. really wish I’d read this earlier. Such a massive piece with so much detail. Definitely turned me on.

this reminds me of a nice story I read here a while back. Sadly it was never finished. If I recall correctly it was that one of the 3 weavers (usually portrait as 3 Sisters) went rougue and started affecting the humans in a way that wasnt allowed. I wish that story would eventually get finished

Hot as fuck!

There is a lot to unpack in this story, I read it first when Mr. Longhorn was on Compuserve. He has a lot of stories from back then that were seriously long haul stories with great writing but the actual sex almost never happens since he stopped writing there before they reached that point. A lot of chapters teased but got closer. Domination was the furthest along of those stories but I think there was such detail in the scenes involved that it might have felt that it was an all night event. I would estimate it might have been accomplished in maybe 4 hours. What was done to Travis was not quite turning him gay, if it did it was already in him. I recall some mention that Nick was planning this for a while out of justice/revenge for something Travis did...but it never was revealed what it was that would drive him to doing this. Mike seemed to be a case of hero worship with perhaps a latent sexual attraction to Travis turned brutal which made flipping him fairly easy. Jimmy may be an opportunist that saw it as a way to gain social reputation within the group, might have been attracted to Travis or might have just had a fetish for dominating people. Anyway, that is all speculation. What was done to Travis though was essentially retraining his brain, not exactly changing orientation. The brain has a certain amount of plasticity that lets itself rewire parts of itself to acclimate to new situations. There are a lot of straight men that try it and love having their prostate massaged. Some require multiple sessions but can go from feeling almost nothing to enjoying it. The brain receives the new nerve signals from the rear instead of the penis and starts to form new connections to accept this new signal and for some it becomes addictive and a preferred stimulation. In this story they used drugs to lower resistance and in theory retrained his brain to expect that stimulation and everything else seems to center around it. There are other stories such as Curiosity that involve someone's prostate becoming over stimulated and they essentially start turning into sluts. I recall there are more chapters to this but I am still trying to pull those chapters out of the internet, I recall the vibrations of the bus as they drive back turns Travis on and I think Nick fucks him on the bus with the team not knowing as they are in the very back and Travis tries to stay quiet. I think they make it to the Coach's get together but I cannot recall if it went farther than that.

Hot. Looking forward to reading more

A good drone will not question AI nor be distracted by personal desires when performing tasks. I believe JB-4788 has learned a lesson this time.

Hello :-) Glad to see people are still deriving pleasure from this story! Right now there are no plans for a continuation. I have been rather busy and haven't been able to write much new material. Plus, truthfully, it would require a pretty intriguing idea for me to want do any more with this particular universe. I'm happy with where things ended and I wouldn't want to ruin a good thing by putting out a mediocre sequel.