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7/9/24, 2:18 PM
I hope that this was enjoyable. It was a long one! I’ve got three chapters more already completed so I won’t wait too long in between. Thank you to all those who have taken the time to read and even more To those who favored it. You are appreciated!
Jul 9, 2024
7/9/24, 6:48 AM
Great to see you posting again! This one feels more like a piece in a larger story than a complete story in its own right, since there's so much context we're not getting (especially when it comes to Permafrost's motivations and ultimate plan). The other thing it could really use is an additional paragraph explaining how Vision Boy has always hero-worshipped Permafrost; that way, the betrayal would have a lot more impact. Still, I think this piece has some very hot imagery with the frozen erect drones.

7/9/24, 1:39 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) It's almost a year since I last posted but it's honestly taken me this long to finish anything. I've a real issue with completing stories. Still, I've a few that are almost done so maybe you'll see more of me soon! I don't envision there being any more installments tbh. Perhaps it's because I'm not a superhero story fan but it's one of the very few projects I've managed not to get carried away with. I had an idea about a brain freezing frost power and it just fit this idea of a turncoat hero and a betrayed younger super. It could have been used on any idol worshipping member of the public, but corrupting another hero, especially an inexperienced one seemed more fun. I originally had a few lines where Permafrost would comment on hero work not paying much but ultimately I chose to hint at a mass-enslavement, city conquering scenario somewhere down the line because that's what turns me on.
7/9/24, 5:34 AM
I loved it soo much I need more. Maybe a prequel about the choir boys or once becoming a full-fledged Incubus he needs to continue corrupting in other areas and other schools to progress up the demon ranks. I would love to see this be a series is what I'm saying.

7/9/24, 1:38 PM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Thank you for your feedback! But to be completely honest, I conceptualized this as a single-chapter story. Maybe I'll look into a sequel when inspiration strikes me (maybe an anthology?). No promises though, as I have no concrete plans where to take the story yet.
7/9/24, 12:12 PM
So love this story. So steamy hot
Elian Richards
7/9/24, 12:00 PM
Dude this has to be in a museum somewhere. You understand the male sexuality so well it’s wild! I mean mixing sex with power is what’s missing in most of the stories and you do it so well man!!
7/6/24, 2:45 AM
Amazing and incredibly erotic chapter. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. Your detailed and excruciatingly arousing description as the “prey” transitions from straight to needy bottom is one of the hottest things I’ve read. Please keep up the outstanding work.

7/6/24, 6:31 AM
@[Thalog](/user/show/10033108) Aw cheers. My first writing efforts...feedback is valued. There's another longer chapter to upload.. then deciding where it goes.

7/9/24, 10:16 AM
@[JJDix](/user/show/10051995) I hope you upload soon. Im really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. And what your creativity has for future chapters and stories. I hope you become a regular contributor here.
7/8/24, 11:48 PM
Super hot and the shitty diapers add more flavor
Anonymous
7/8/24, 11:41 PM
Bump. This was really good, with the initial character development, the description of the process, and, as FreeThinker said, having Ezra watch the process first before it happens to him. The darker psychological moments (like the "small voice in the darkness" paragraph), the sadistic comments of Crylex ("you will indeed do anything") also were erotic. More please -- prequel, sequel, more chapters, anything!
7/8/24, 11:17 PM
OMG mmm can't help but keep coming back to the romance novels. Giggles hahaha. Oh how I love the stories
7/8/24, 10:59 PM
This story is the absolute best!