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Lookintomyeyesboy.
7/6/24, 6:05 PM
BTW, someone in the last chapter floated the theory that the trapped tempter would be Matt's dad, and I have to say, you were right... in the first draft. That was my original idea, but in the second rewrite it felt like it didn't fit the way I wanted to. I admit, in terms of drama it kinda works, but it just doesn't fit right to the rest of the story. But yeah, you read my mind. I just changed it afterwards.
7/6/24, 4:51 PM
I loved the way you wrote this story. It feels real and possible and wholesome. Thank you very much
J
7/6/24, 4:35 PM
Thank you for the story
hypnosub
7/6/24, 3:52 PM
Aw, Jace and Dylan’s date was so cute! Their relationship has been my favorite part of this series. I can’t wait to see how it unfolds! I’m also curious how a fourth roommate would change things. Maybe that’d be another himbo jock? 👀 I can’t wait to see what you come up with!
7/6/24, 2:54 PM
Lucky Oli! Being treated like a princess
offeringservice26
7/6/24, 2:38 PM
Is this written by AI?
7/6/24, 2:26 PM
👍👍👍👍👍👍🥰
7/6/24, 1:52 PM
I'm a bit bummed Brian lost, cuz I like an evil dude taking over haha, but Riley's revenge is sweet as well!

7/6/24, 2:20 PM
@[TurkeyVulture](/user/show/897890) Well, next week is the last Lamphouse chapter, but the week after that, I have a short story that might interest you then. "Bad guy winning" is always subjective, but the story is called "Did You Hypnotize Me?" and is set to publish 7/19. I think it is something you would enjoy. :)
7/6/24, 2:20 PM
I really like the story so far. You are really go in developing each character as individuals, but this chapter, Tim and Scott’s personality seemed to have merged towards the end. Tim seemed liked he was already crushing on his uncle Bob, and Scott seemed like a more dominant figure. It is good to see that Tim got some development and he came out of his shell, but at the end, they seem like their personalities could be interchangeable. I would love to see Bob get more love from at least one of his nephews.
7/6/24, 1:57 PM
Absolutely awesome!