I love how character driven this has been. Lots of rings, fogs, devices, genie stories but few stories progress from the wants and downfalls of people. I also love the "not everything has to be your responsibility" Can't wait for the next one :)

This is a great twisted story, and I love the use of flashbacks. I'm just surprised it didn't get entered into the "Wrong Roommate" contest, because it fits the brief and would have been a contender for the win.

Damn I love this. Another sexy transformation. Makes me wish that somehow these things could actually happen 😈

@avionneX Some news about your stories?

Loving these transformations!

Man do you have me totally hooked on your stories bro. Love them all and this one is especially addictive. Can't wait to read the conclusion I'm sure it'll be killer. Love that Brian finally got bitched and has accepted what he really is and wanted all along. Noticed how you snuck his true desire into the hypnosis scene 😈 with a simple question and a very simple quick reply. Nothing better than vocalizing what you're true desires are. I'm sure Brian is really thankful in the end how good his hole feels and what a good bitch he's going to strive to be for ALL cocks.

He needs a big fat gut to match his new mindset.

I loved this story! It was super cute and funny and a great addition to Cupid. Just because this site is smutty doesn't mean it can't have some pure romance. Good job with this.

You know, all day long I've been feeling oddly excited. I wasn't entirely sure why. But now I realize that I was genuinely thrilled to read this next chapter, because that's how I've been feeling every Friday for weeks. It's been a long time since I was genuinely on pins and needles with anticipation for something like this, so before all else--thank you, Naedre, for reminding me of what it feels like to be excited. :D And what excitement. I mean, this is BRILLIANT! For one thing, you have my absolute favorite type of induction in the world--a slow, "classic" hypnosis, gradually going under and falling under a submissive spell. That doesn't show up a lot on here, but you've absolutely nailed it. And speaking of nailing, you ALSO managed to keep Brian and Riley's personalities completely intact for the entire chapter. We got to see Brian desperately try to maintain his "alpha" control, and Riley still floating in that in-between place of submission and domination. Watching the submission slowly fade from Riley and reawakening his true self was my favorite part--especially when he had his moment of realization about Brian's true character. "Poison" is the perfect word for him, and now Riley is free. I cheered when that happened! :D I also have to commend you on PERFECTLY setting up the pieces for this to happen. Every wish, every command from Brian, every physical change...you kept track of them all like perfect parts of a Rube Goldberg machine, and they all sprung to become the perfect trap, freeing Riley and imprisoning Brian. And Riley's lack of anger in the moment also proves that his good heart remained intact through it all. I'm very curious as to what will happen with his next wish, and what Tyler (and possibly Noah and Joe) will do now that Brian is in their power. I feel like Brian has received his sexual comeuppance perfectly--and even then, you did a great job making it clear that this wasn't just "bottoming = punishment/submissiveness." You've been making that distinction throughout the whole story, along with other awesome points about so many things--sexuality, pleasure, slutdom--being a spectrum. It's amazing. I can't thank you enough for the gift of this story, Naedre. But I'll try: Thank you, thank you, thank you! :D This is officially a masterpiece!

I about cum in my cage just reading this. I loved the reversal. Definitely a great way for the wishes to work out