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7/5/24, 2:32 PM
Awesome! Brian getting what he deserves!
Anonymous
7/5/24, 12:39 PM
Part 2?
7/4/24, 11:03 AM
Are you implying Peter only has control of his body only to go to the gym and shower?

DD
7/5/24, 12:31 PM
@[Mooherder](/user/show/10006350) Mmm that's so hot though. Talk about having the body and all it's advantages without the annoyance of soending all that time working out... unless you're into hours and hours of activity regularly.
7/5/24, 12:28 PM
Thought this was great and I hope there is more to come
7/5/24, 12:04 PM
This is the only drone story I’ve ever really clicked with. Amazing job, man! A good source of plot conflict would be a rogue unit! Some sort of “mutation” or error code that makes it unable to respond to the Prime and spread some sort of corrupting influence to other drones and/or civilians. That opens up lots of drone designations. You can have dedicated “soldier” and “infiltrator” castes as the war between the two drone swarms heats up! Obviously Alex’s swarm is ultimately victorious, but there could be a lot of juice in a conflict
7/5/24, 5:53 AM
I'm loving this story so much, it's got all my favourite narrative beats. Slow burn, wholesomeness, romance, friendship, personal growth, gradual change, a coach Dom, subs undergoing the same training and of course a super hot hypno induced jock/himbo transformation. Can't wait to see what these three lovable goofballs get up to next. Keep up the great work.
Thom
7/4/24, 11:30 PM
Just found this! Wonderful story!!
Jul 4, 2024
7/4/24, 9:04 PM
What a fun story! And hot, too. I bet, somewhere on this world, there are some guys playing games just like this. I envy them!
Silas
7/4/24, 8:58 PM
So hot and well written. Please continue this 😍
7/4/24, 7:45 PM
I'm usually not particularly into dumbing down stories, I usually like when the recipient of the mind control/brainwashing is intelligent and even aware of what's going on but absolutely helpless to stop it. That being said, this has to be one of my favorites I've read in a long long time on this site, it's fun, it's sexy, it's creative and it's lighthearted as well! I'm very curious to see who wrote this when the challenge event ends!