Recent Comments

7/5/24, 5:53 AM
I'm loving this story so much, it's got all my favourite narrative beats. Slow burn, wholesomeness, romance, friendship, personal growth, gradual change, a coach Dom, subs undergoing the same training and of course a super hot hypno induced jock/himbo transformation. Can't wait to see what these three lovable goofballs get up to next. Keep up the great work.
Thom
7/4/24, 11:30 PM
Just found this! Wonderful story!!
Jul 4, 2024
7/4/24, 9:04 PM
What a fun story! And hot, too. I bet, somewhere on this world, there are some guys playing games just like this. I envy them!
Silas
7/4/24, 8:58 PM
So hot and well written. Please continue this 😍
7/4/24, 7:45 PM
I'm usually not particularly into dumbing down stories, I usually like when the recipient of the mind control/brainwashing is intelligent and even aware of what's going on but absolutely helpless to stop it. That being said, this has to be one of my favorites I've read in a long long time on this site, it's fun, it's sexy, it's creative and it's lighthearted as well! I'm very curious to see who wrote this when the challenge event ends!
Papa WereBear
7/4/24, 12:43 AM
Sorry, 2023 above... Were not quite 9 years in the future... Yet. :rofl:

Anonymous
7/4/24, 7:28 PM
@[Papa WereBear](/user/show/10052057) Hello there. I am so sorry 😞. I hope that you are doing better health wise. I had forgotten about my comment on the story last year, but your reply and link to the story provided me with the opportunity to read it again. I will need to send it to myself, as I have done with other stories you have written, so I can read it again 😊. I truly enjoy your stories so very much. I wouldn't mind having some of these situations happen to me. Big bear hugs 🤗🤗🐻🐻.
thesaxcat
7/4/24, 6:22 PM
I quite enjoyed this chapter. Well done!
hypnosub
7/4/24, 6:08 PM
AHHHH!! I don’t know how it’s possible, but this story gets better with every chapter! I’m glad that it’s revealed that Jace was listening to Adam’s files. I feel like this opens up a lot of opportunities for the three of them to have hypno fun. And we got to see a little of that at the end of the chapter. Dylan taking Adam and Jace under at the same time got my dick ridiculously hard, lol. I can’t wait to see how Dylan and Adam help Jace become a himbo jock permanently. His transformation is gonna be so hot to read! And side note: I really love how you incorporate more wholesome elements into this story. Like how you develop Jace and Dylan’s relationship. It’s clear they really like each other, and it’s cute to see them explore their feelings. And I also love the genuine friendship between the three of the roommates. They really care for each other and want to support each other. Also, the way that Dylan asks for explicit consent when it comes to hypnosis is so sweet! Basically, I love everything about this series, haha. Thanks again for sharing this awesome story with us!
7/4/24, 5:10 AM
Oh my gooosh please continue

7/4/24, 5:32 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) The first draft had been a fair bit longer, but during rewrites, I hit a point where I realized that what I had up to that point made a better intro chapter to a short series rather than 3/4 of a story. I don't think I'll have time to write other chapters until after the Story Challenge is over, though, so you'll have to be patient.

7/4/24, 5:17 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) That's ok with me. We all have lives. I appreciate this awesome story!
Jul 4, 2024
7/4/24, 5:06 PM
Oh GOD I wish I had friends like this: SUCH a hot idea, and very well-executed!