Recent Comments

7/3/24, 3:05 AM
Bravo!!! Really great idea and story. Can't wait to see where this one goes from here.
7/3/24, 2:53 AM
🥴🤤
7/3/24, 12:06 AM
Super hot!
7/3/24, 12:01 AM
Oh, how I want this story to develop...
7/2/24, 11:59 PM
Very hot story!
Anonymous
7/2/24, 11:41 PM
“I NEVER FUCKED MY DAD” and “I’m not homophobic what the fuck” were both extremely funny. Cant wait to see where this will go
7/2/24, 6:38 PM
Oh geez, this was hot! Just a couple of spots where the names got swapped, but still great.

Anonymous
7/2/24, 8:54 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Author here (from a guest account so as not to reveal my identity). I swear I proof read every story at least 3 times before hitting publish and yet there are always mistakes like this. It's like I go blind when reading my own stuff. If you have the time would you be so kind as to tell me where I've mixed up the names so I can edit it out? No problem if not, I'll find them myself eventually.

7/2/24, 9:23 PM
@Anonymous I only remember one place might have done that, but I did noticed you spelled David as Dafid once near the end. I'm assuming you can do a search to find that one, just thought since you were asking I'd add my own comment. It's okay though, I find mistakes in my writing all the damn time. Sometimes months later.

7/2/24, 10:28 PM
@Anonymous I think I saw it when they were watching the Power Rangers and David helped Keith take off his shirt.

7/2/24, 11:35 PM
@Anonymous "Keith, meanwhile, was cursing himself. He didn’t know whether Keith was actually so oblivious..." i think the first keith is david here.
Anonymous
7/2/24, 10:58 PM
This rules! Really sweet story, and the vengeance is perfect! Also, the description “the Father must pay for his sins” made me giggle for some reason lol. You’re a very good writer!
6/26/24, 1:23 PM
Really cool! Tho, I am confused by you saying you didn't have time. I am commenting on June 26th, the contest ends on **July** 29th.

6/26/24, 1:54 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks for the comment. I don’t have time due to work demands and learning disabilities that require I give myself time to edit. I don’t have a perfect system in place for writing. Hope that clears up the confusion.

7/2/24, 7:14 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) :+1: understandable. Will be interested in reading more from you, once the names are revealed, it's a really good story.

7/2/24, 10:26 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Great!
thesaxcat
7/2/24, 8:48 PM
Nice start. Hope the next part comes Soon.

7/2/24, 9:17 PM
@[thesaxcat](/user/show/10005285) Already working on it. Glad you enjoyed