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Eric
6/17/25, 4:19 PM
The most boring story

6/18/25, 7:10 PM
@[Eric](/user/show/10017971) This comment is really inappropriate, especially considering the context shared in the author's afterword. Please keep in mind our site's [commenting guidelines](https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/etiquette-and-rules-for-the-sites-comments-section/8237), going forward. And please read the room a bit better in the future.
AAA
6/15/25, 10:41 PM
First off, this is amazing smut. Not quite my cup of tea, but excellent by any measure, and I've gotten off to it twice so far. The third time will be my reward for bothering to type this ;). --- Just wondering; and I do feel it's a bit rude to put requests into a review, but I'm gonna do it anyway. 'cuz I'm greedy and I think you'd craft any porn well: How much does the idea exploring/portraying Michael getting into bodybuilding with Cody; and then Michael pushing himself and Cody into going further than Cody initially intended appeal to you as a writer? --- At this point I might as well write what I would find hot, and hope that it tickles your fancy. - Depiction of muscle growth and typical masculine traits (and eagerness both for; and to further develop) those throughout. - Cody's method of influnce over Michael is discovered by Michael (after Michael is already heavily influenced to like what is being done to him) - Michael uses said method on Cody, and possibly on himself _via_ Cody in a recursive method - The two of them grow into hairy muscle jocks who love taking and giving cock **hard**, and love working out hard and love when the other is working out hard. - Maybe a few scenes of them working out and exulting in their shared masculinity. Forgive the lack of imagination in my idea/request, but sometimes a man wants something that's a bit simple, but crafted with the skill you've demonstrated. ---- Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna do some pushups, stick a vibrator in myself and then reread this piece of fucking art that you so generously shared with us all. [Edit: The reason that I don't think my idea/request might be your personal cup of smut is that you chose to go with a 'boy/daddy' plotline in this, whereas I'm hoping to see (i.e. **_fucking love the idea of_**) both parties fall under the influence of eachother's (new) desires, so that 1. they both become/regard eachother as peers, 2. neither has _actual_ control over the situation as a whole]

6/16/25, 1:26 AM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Hi there! Thank you very much for the detailed comment. I very much appreciate it and I’m glad that the story got you off, despite it not fully being up your alley. As you predicted, I don’t think that I’m interested in exploring the story progression that you suggested. I’m not saying that your suggestion was bad, it’s just not something that I’m very into. The main thing that appeals to me about hypnosis/mind control is the potential to create a dom/sub dynamic. I like when one person is firmly in control of the other, and hypnosis/mind is a great vehicle for exploring that. Something about the addition sweat/pheromones to the dynamic reinforces it for me, probably because it’s a very traditionally masculine trait, which is how I usually like to portray the doms in my stories. I totally understand why shifting dynamics appeal to people, I just don’t see myself going down that path. Also, even though I do like muscles (one of my top kinks), I’m not that into muscle growth. However, I do want to say that I don’t find you giving me the request to be rude. After all, if you never ask, you’ll never know. If it was **only** the request with no commentary on this story, I may feel differently, but you gave your feelings on that and complimented my writing ability, both of which I appreciate.

6/18/25, 5:37 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Dude, reading reviews like yours are so good, keep doing it please
6/16/25, 6:17 PM
Oooh, so it is a network, and not just AI to drone point control? Can’t wait to see how that works out as the network expands.

6/18/25, 5:26 PM
@[RubberLeatherDrone](/user/show/129598) Me too! I'm still writing and am working on a satisfying conclusion. Having a touch of writers block though, I must admit.
6/16/25, 7:43 AM
Great chapter. Good drones obey and JB-4788 is turning into a very good drone. 🔥🔥🔥

6/18/25, 5:25 PM
@[SERVE-016](/user/show/10034267) Please remember that JB-4788 is a very young drone and is still in its "honeymoon" phase. Hiccups may/will occur.
Drifting Scot
6/16/25, 10:36 AM
Another great chapter, good to know that Justin accepted becoming Drone JB-4788, its life will be so much more interesting...who will be the next convert?

6/18/25, 5:24 PM
@Drifting Scot I'm unsure if in this particular story I plan on converting anyone else, as this is focused on JB-4788's conversion. However, I am certainly open to expanding the network and its army of drones in future installations should I have the creativity.
6/18/25, 6:13 AM
this series is getting better and better, one of the best Drone stories it has read in a long time

6/18/25, 5:23 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it.
6/16/25, 6:26 AM
Reinhart's dirty talk is amazing and the story is so mysterious that even when the foreshadowing comes to light, it surprises me in the way it does (does that makes sense?) I have to say that I find myself hoping that Joey will be able to get out of there with most of his brain intact. Maybe it's the hint for permanent dumbing or the malice in Reinhart's glee, that makes me want to shout "get out of there!!". I hope that Joey's snooping and trying to connect the dots will come to fruition before Josef is lost forever. But hey, at least it will be done in one hell of a sexy way. Also, Gayson is just perfect. You deserve top marks just for that.

6/18/25, 5:19 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) What a lovely comment! I'm glad to hear you are engaged with the story :blush:
Anonymous
6/18/25, 4:59 PM
We need more parts, please
6/17/25, 2:44 AM
Oh this is so hot! How does one enter this program?! 🥵

6/18/25, 6:05 AM
@[JRDicks69](/user/show/918362) If only I knew…

6/18/25, 3:54 PM
@[Latexboy4788](/user/show/10062968) XD!
6/18/25, 2:38 PM
I love this story so much, and I’m SO HAPPY Javier got a boyfriend who loves him for the total slut he is :heart_eyes: