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Jun 2, 2024
7/2/24, 1:19 PM
such a hot story...its freaky but i wonder what a micro dick would feel like.....
7/2/24, 11:50 AM
i love how your mind works to the smells and the power of the smell in the sensual experience. THANKYOU
7/2/24, 8:20 AM
Damn that's hot. You leaving me thirsty 😆
7/2/24, 7:08 AM
Personally i prefer a slower transition. The jump to their harsh treatment over seemingly petty and almost arbitrary issues was a little much for me.
7/2/24, 6:49 AM
I love the senario, the characters, and the direction of the plot. The one thing that bothered me a little bit is the missed opportunity to deal with Doug's potential issues and concerns. Doug obviously knows very little about the lifestyle he has been asked to commit to. James is expecting a very fast response to a serious life-changing decision. That said, I am taking the leap myself into the next chapter.
6/26/22, 4:58 PM
This is really hot. The finger-play with Doug's more-than-willing mouth is where I really started to get into it! And the overall set-up has many potential outcomes running through my head already...

7/2/24, 6:43 AM
@[FreeThinker](/user/show/10004043) i totally agree with you about the finger-play, the setup, and the potential. This hits all my major kinks. Very hot and looking forward to reading on...
Anonymous
7/2/24, 6:33 AM
I hadn’t noticed it being written via ai, but now it makes all too much sense, especially considering how much shit got repeated constantly. I assumed it was lazy writing, but even besides that it felt way too sad. Unfortunate.
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/11/20, 11:25 AM
Love the story, you write beautifully and speak English better than some people whose native tongue is English. I have one question though at the end right here" > I whined in protest, but I already felt him wiggling out from under me. Suddenly I was cold. I looked up at him as he was putting on his clothes. > “Jessica.” he started. “Uhm… They’re. They’re probably worried sick by now. We have to go back.” When Jason calls Matthew "Jessica", is that a typo and you meant to write "Matthew" and not the name of Jason's former GF, or did Matthew switch bodies with Jessica and become her in body and mind and so he's now Jessica, or is Matthew still Matthew but in Jason's mind he's Jessica? If you could clear that up for me that would be great. Keep on writing man.

Anonymous
7/2/24, 3:38 AM
@Anonymous Not the author, but my assumption was that Jason remembered Jessica and said her name in a sort of “Oh yeah! Jessica!” type of way, if that makes sense
7/2/24, 3:06 AM
Very interesting story!

7/2/24, 3:38 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks, man.
7/2/24, 3:09 AM
Awesome story, bro! :sunglasses: I'm looking forward to many more chapters where, I'm sure, the roomies will have lots of fun.