Recent Comments

7/1/24, 8:14 PM
I thought this story was very cute. And you probably should have cross-published it on the Cupid site so that it would be eligible for romance ratings and the tag new beginnings.
7/1/24, 8:08 AM
Lovely story. Erotic, romantic, and with some clever D&D based world building.

7/1/24, 7:45 PM
@[Zandramas](/user/show/10050408) Thanks! I could have used more original terminology but for a short story I thought I would just socket it into something that felt approachable.
7/1/24, 7:45 PM
Enjoying this one; its a "classic" story told well, so even if I'm (pretty sure) i know the "twist", its still fun and worth the read. Please keep it up, you're doing great.
7/1/24, 2:09 AM
what a fun story! I liked the dnd-ish lore, it's fun and engaging

7/1/24, 7:44 PM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) Glad you liked it! I thought using some pseudo D&D terminology would help frame the story. After all, it seems like everybody has been playing Baldur's Gate 3 this year.
7/1/24, 7:35 PM
great story, i certainly hope you continue it, it's really really well done, enjoy the slow build up.
Zander
7/1/24, 7:12 PM
Thank you for this interesting story. I will follow the updates. In some ways, your story reminds me of the stories of the author of Shattared Honor, if you have not read him (I advise you to read him), he is a very good author of stories focused on the theme of hypnosis and transformation of Heroes. What I like about his stories is that they have both bad endings and good endings for the characters in the stories and their arcs, followed by their fate being revealed in other parts. I hope the main character, as in name, will be Solaris himself and his path to the Fall as a Hero, and then to his triumphal return as a hero after the fall.
Anonymous
6/27/24, 10:28 PM
I gotta say as a guy with a body type like David's it was nice to read about it.

7/1/24, 4:55 PM
@Anonymous Glad you liked it! In my opinion there aren't enough stories about guys with the heavier dadbod kind of bodies, so I'm happy to fill that void when I can. 🙂
6/27/24, 8:00 PM
This is very much a story that shouldn't be rushed. It's focused on charicter mindset and self realization is what makes it so good. Take your time and I would love to read more in the future! On another note, I had kind of hoped that J would make D 'wear' something explicitly sexual like a cockring, or a buttplug or something. What you did write was a lot more interesting, but if they do another "Wear what I tell you" bet in the future I would love to see something like that! Thanks for writing!

7/1/24, 4:52 PM
@[Lotharel](/user/show/909244) Oh there definitely will be some of that in the future, but it's got to build to that. I've got plans to expose David to some wilder stuff, but even though he trusts Jacob he'll need to build up to just how wild Jacob is on the inside.
6/24/24, 10:18 AM
Love it, i really need to read how all of this ends!

7/1/24, 4:50 PM
@[Chileanguy93](/user/show/946977) Well I've been working on the outline for the next part and it's already gotten split into two separate stories. I'm not sure how long the next chapter will be or if it will need to be several parts, but I'm working on it and it will continue!
7/1/24, 4:34 PM
That was fantastic. Please whoever wrote this continue the series or someone continue the theme. Cream-it pills need to be given to all the jocks!