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6/30/24, 9:58 PM
I've just discovered this series and am loving it! I was going to wait until I was finished with the entirety before commenting, but since this is an "ending" in the current dramatic arc, I'll take a moment to share my thoughts. I had been considering a story remarkably like this, hitting a lot of similar beats in my head, but this is so beautifully written, I wouldn't want to try and compete with it. You've managed to combine the cerebral with the lust-factor and created a compelling narrative. I'm excited to see where it goes. Thank you for this, even though it ruins my plans.

7/1/24, 2:04 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks! I’m glad you found it and like it. I’m just starting to get back to continuing this series after a long break, and I’m glad it still resonates.

7/1/24, 11:30 AM
@[GruffGinger](/user/show/908827) I know! That's what made me go back to the beginning and absorb the entire thing. Glad you're back on it. Further proof to authors that your work will always find new readers.
6/29/24, 6:06 AM
I have so many words, but ill just say I LOVED this chapter. Javi always saying "not a genie" reminds me of Janet from "The Good Place" anytime someone refers to it as female ("also, not a girl") :)

7/1/24, 9:49 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) Huh, I didn't think about it, but that's a cool reference!
7/1/24, 9:25 AM
Noah and Joe are just so precious and I love it! Excellent chapter as always, though I think I'll wait until you release the next one before I read the depressing part despite my curiosity. Waiting to next Friday! :)
7/1/24, 7:53 AM
I loved this story. Great job!! Please keep it coming!!
7/1/24, 6:51 AM
So Brian's the only one vulnerable to hypnosis now. Woopsies. As much as I want to see him get his just desserts, I wouldn't mind a revisit of this later with certain 'bad ends'. But this is a good story, especially since I really hated Brian before (and still do) but now he sometimes has hot ideas, unethical though they are. I actually really liked the 'twinning' bit before, and it makes me wonder if Brian wouldn't just make all his personal slaves look the same as well.
7/1/24, 5:08 AM
How intense. Decker seems more intuitive than you would guess. But oblivious in other ways. So is Nathan the professor only somehow physically and mentally scrubbed more quickly...but then why does Outis come at him direct It seems he is pairing them off to feed into the other so Ned's provide an extra for the odd man out. But Decker is so neurotic the illusion gets in but can't take hold. Especially post marooning. Outis worries me wondering what he did to the prof. Though arguably the shenanigans start on it with Sloan drugging thd prof. Wonder if ala Cabin in the Woods Sloan will be the same one as notes his friends delineate to douche stereotypes Is Decker last or first down and what mean for the rest or the audience going forward
6/30/24, 11:13 AM
Wow so hot! 🔥 I love how you sprinkled bits of MC's thoughts all over. Hoping to see more from his POV.

7/1/24, 3:37 AM
@[moolah](/user/show/69692) Oh thanks! I sprinkled the MC’s thoughts because I couldn’t make up my mind on which character to focus on. I ended up with Lias’ POV because I wanted to try something different to keep me going. I am tempted to make a Part 3 or even this same chapter from MC’s POV when he’s getting a dick mold for the sex toys.
7/1/24, 2:16 AM
This was sooooo hot! Would love to discover where these amazing enhanced garments come from!
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6/28/24, 3:25 PM
This was a fun story! Love the twist at the end, they never stood a chance. Would love to wind up just like Parker did myself

7/1/24, 2:08 AM
@Anonymous Thank you for the comment!
6/30/24, 10:51 PM
Amazing story! Really got me going!

7/1/24, 2:07 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you like it!