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6/29/24, 10:06 PM
Heat in the comment section!! That’s a new one. …good? I guess? Who doesn’t want a bit of passion here and there? Just remember we’re all on the same side, and that side is “this is a successful series by our pal Naedre, and let’s not sully an author’s work by squabbling in the comment section of that work.” If y’all wanna go verbal fisty cuffs there’s already several venues for that; PMs, the site’s forum, the site chat rooms, or even discord!

6/30/24, 1:57 AM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) I agree, the comment section of someone's chapters is not the place for that kind of discussion.
6/30/24, 1:49 AM
A brilliant two chapters so far, very worthy of commendation! Your writing, your characters, the way the story flows naturally all work together very well. Great work, and a very strong contender for this challenge prompt!
6/30/24, 1:44 AM
Great transformation.
6/30/24, 12:45 AM
That was a hot chapter.
6/29/24, 11:19 PM
wonderful and wait
6/29/24, 10:58 PM
Please keep updating this! So hot and awesome
Muscle-Flex
6/29/24, 4:52 PM
Great example of short-story writing. Simple premise with good description and psychological insight so we get sucked right into the story quickly and then a fun surprise ending. Nice job!

6/29/24, 9:58 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) This comment made my day! I am so glad you enjoyed it :D
6/29/24, 9:12 PM
oh my god, Diego's orgasmic breakthrough _literally_ conjures a Southern-accented werewolf alpha top straight out of an omegaverse fic... named Biscuit... He might be one of my favorite additions to Diego's unwitting harem of tops who are eager to pound his straight butt... Also there's something very funny and perfect in how Diego still isn't *actually* a straight guy addicted to gay sex—he's explicitly a straight guy merely addicted to the mad-science genius breakthroughs he gets exclusively when he has gay sex! But like, addicted to the mad science in an incredibly horny way? The way he'll see a big dick and starts drooling (both from his mouth, and his ass) at the thought of it pounding new ideas for inventions into his head... while still retaining all those aspects of his straight, pre-mad-science personality. It makes me realize how rare it is to have a story like this where the protagonist is still *himself* all the way through... It's still Diego making all the decisions and actively driving the madcap plot, even as numerous other people (W.B., the harem of tops...) are trying to grab the steering wheel from him too. P.S. Looking forward to more scenes with Biscuit... A polite Southern werewolf with a devious horny streak, woof... 👀
Anon
6/28/24, 3:41 PM
Damn everything was going so well until evil Christians and gay Muslims that I thought Biden bought the website for a second

6/28/24, 3:52 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/910942) Fairly certain this is a joke, but to be clear, not ‘evil Christians.’ Evil Inquisitors. I am only taking the bold historical stance that the Spanish Inquisition was bad, actually.

Anon
6/28/24, 4:05 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) well as a judiciary system it was better than the previos one because it actually had a process and the king didn't just decide who was right and who was wrong. Like everything there is always a good and a bad side. But it's a heavy conversation we probably shouldn't have here

6/29/24, 6:22 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/910942) Then why’d you bring it up? lol Saying Colonialism was a generally bad move for humanity isn’t really controversial or… incorrect. Hindsight has taught us that.

Anonymous
6/29/24, 8:16 PM
@[Asisasio](/user/show/128107) I didn't bring it up? If anything I'm stopping the conversation saying we shouldn't discuss it here. And you are falling for the same thing saying "X was generally bad or something" so hindsight clearly didn't taught you anything at all

6/29/24, 8:20 PM
@Anonymous Trump, is it you? On a gay kink site?

Anonymous
6/29/24, 8:29 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) even as a joke, it's sad the current political climate is so fucked up you get labeled as a right winger for talking about history

6/29/24, 8:54 PM
@Anonymous You started it with your Biden comment, which was really unnecessary!

Anonymous
6/29/24, 9:04 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) It's impossible to read "gay Muslism being pursued by Christians" and not link it to current political ideologies. My comment was far from unnecessary, if anythign there should be more
6/29/24, 7:49 PM
Part 1 already promised to have a good premise, this part 2 confirms it and has a good pace on the changes and on the information we recieve, excited for part 3!