Another chapter for us to enjoy. You have us all in your power, Jack.

getting interesting, the mark one cyborgs have started to be rounded up, for an upgrade, maybe?

This deserves more love than it seems to have gotten! Cuckolding is very much not my kink, but you made it highly erotic here, man.

I crave being in Jakes place...cuckold faggot......

I love how your stories always have Tim saving the day... after all the hot struff has happemned, of course. Though itkinda disappoints me that Tim hasn't been properly violated in this series.

Just want to say that this story really hit the spot for me! Fit guys getting stupider and fatter always turns me on, but it’s the idea of becoming lazy and apathetic that sends me over the edge. Not many stories do that, but yours was picture-perfect!

I...holy SHIT. This was INCREDIBLE. How did you *think* of this? What an amazing chapter! I deliberately waited until I had time to read it carefully, and it was 100% worth the wait. I absolutely love Noah and Joe revealing their pasts--if there was ever an example of the perfect balance of "showing and telling," you found it in the brief but succinct story that Joe tells about his father. We don't need a single word more to learn what happened to his mother. And Joe showing that he was truly the bigger person by not seeking revenge, despite having all the magic in the world at his disposal...THAT'S how you write a balanced character. (Similarly, I love how all three men instantly reject Brian's "alpha pheromones" wish as stupid and self-indulgent--it again helps to show Brian as an aberration in the new and balanced world you're creating). You also do a brilliant job at depicting reality changes--everyone's memories, and the world's policies, sliding into place in the new "Nerd cock as needed for jocks" version of the universe. I especially love the new take on Cinderella with jocks and nerds seeking each other's "perfect fit" out through sex, and how nerd/jock hybrids get to feel both desires at once! And I love the idea of preventing sexual assaulters, too. If I have one complaint about this chapter, it's the form that prevention takes--the idea of bottoming and submission as a "punishment" raised my hackles slightly. But you do such an amazing job outlining the difference between submission and mutual pleasure, of what it means to bottom for joy while having an equal power balance versus being forced into it like Brian does, that it's understandable. And then, good LORD, the Void. A brief but brilliant recap of the Spanish Inquisition, false Christians converting and torturing innocents in the name of God, and the *perfect* symbol of the bastardization of Islamic history--a white Christian stealing something from Islamic culture, modifying it for evil purposes, and using it to literally enslave a descendant of that culture...I mean, in all seriousness, how do you DO that? In just one short section you've given Javi an entire backstory while never sacrificing plot, forward motion, or the other characterizations (Tyler's transformation of himself into the knight of Javi's dreams and sacred vow to save the day was the perfect fairy-tale ending). I say this with all the seriousness I can muster, Naedre: you are truly a gifted writer. You've done something incredible here, and we're all so lucky to get the chance to read your work. From the bottom of my heart...thank you. :)

Hey, just a heads up that I had to reorganize the series designations a little bit, since it was causing glitches on the backend to have numerous 'chapter ones' in a single series (aka, the Gay Fairy Tales series). I hope this is alright on your end. Please let me know if not!

I wish you would have kept going

Replied to a few other comments, but wanted to mention that I loved the idea of you doing a dronification/petplay story at some point! You had mentioned one guy on the app being into that and think your amazing writing style would make for a fun read. Btw, I did have thoughts on how you might conclude that "magic textbook" story, was always sad that Sam and the Thor-esque jock who loved him never got around to their happy ending. But maybe you've moved too far on from that one