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11/26/23, 7:50 PM
I thoroughly regret not reading this series sooner. Your world building remains top tier, the humor is just silly enough to keep things sexy, and I have to say I’m very very excited to see where Diego’s genius takes him next!!

11/27/23, 10:44 PM
@[tumnus](/user/show/917823) I appreciate this comment so much! The general lack of response to this series has bummed me out, but even a few readers mentioning that they like it gives me enthusiasm to continue.

6/29/24, 1:18 AM
@[tumnus](/user/show/917823) Agreed! The first chapter I struggled to understand a bit, but going over it again I'm glad I gave it another try!
Nutiper
10/29/23, 12:06 AM
I meant to comment on this last week when it was posted, but this really is one of my favorite ongoing stories on the site. Plus there's something funny about how, in _this_ chapter, Diego's AI assistant just flat-out concludes that the best way to minmax Diego's orgasms is "right, from now on, you can orgasm endlessly from your BUTT, and with MEN! Gay sex is where it's at, facts don't care about your feelings _honk honk_." Though honestly my favorite part is the way the humor keeps unfolding into surprisingly detailed worldbuilding — and also, how you keep adding another potential boyfriend every chapter, so that Diego's roster of guys who want to fuck him (or maybe date him) just keeps expanding. It's almost like a running joke at this point, but also really fun to watch? It's like seeing a master juggler go "and now, check _this_ out!" as he keeps adding more and more colored balls to his juggling routine without dropping a single one. I rate this five _chef's kiss_ emojis. It's fantastic.

6/29/24, 1:18 AM
@Nutiper Agreed! Finally getting around to this series and love the premise! Glad to see a new chapter out and to know the author is still adding new chapters!
6/29/24, 12:22 AM
I can't find the words... I enjoyed the wishes this chapter, the changes to the world, the unique justice... Then, the void... I have no words, but... Hauntingly beautiful, comes to mind... sad and heartbreaking, painful... that left me sobbing. Can't wait for more!
6/28/24, 11:05 PM
Fantastic!
6/28/24, 10:31 PM
I don't get how you keep topping yourself like this. Must be a jock and a nerd ;) seriously though... I'm so impressed. And turned on. Congrats and thank you.
6/25/24, 6:32 AM
I don’t understand the dichotomy between our heroes thoughts of “So far the things he’d done would only affect them at home, but if he’d lost Chris’ girlfriend, that’d be going too far into ruining somebody’s life, somebody good to him at that.” And One of Charlie’s friends finally arrived, took one look at Mason, and went in for the kill. Mason did everything he could not to make eye contact, but the boy was persistent. He walked up, whispered something in Mason’s ear that seemed to make the man want to throw up, then smiled bashfully. Mason angrily, against his own will, led the boy up to his room to ‘talk some more“ followed by “ Mason stumbled down the stairs with a freshly fucked look on his face, along with a lot of resentment. His costume was a little messy, and his wig was askew, but he was otherwise no worse for wear; unless you counted the hickies on his chest. His little friend followed behind him, satisfied and smiling.” and “Mason’s friend slipped him a paper presumably bearing his phone number before disappearing into the crowd. Mason looked at it angrily before crumpling it up.” I understand that charlie is in love with Chris and not Mason but the author has mostly tried to portray charlie as not destroying the lives of his family. Somehow I find having Mason get raped by strangers to be pretty life and mind destroying. This is especially true as the way Charlie does it through Grindr and face to face meetings pretty much assures that this will make it well beyond the house. Tom

Hypno-boy
6/28/24, 9:32 PM
@[Thomas White](/user/show/10051527) I do think that's a good point, but I guess the point I was trying to get across was that Charlie felt some degree of remorse for wrecking things for Chris when Chris was only ever nice to him. Mason, who canonically made his life hell, is not entitled to that same sympathy at least from Charlie. Aside from that, being forced to do sexual things with your brothers would make you pretty fucked up in the head even if it wasn't public, so I think Charlie's reasoning is flawed on a number of levels. Charlie is a morally confused character. All of his actions thus far have been bad, including his actions to Chris. If you're thinking that his thought process doesn't make sense, that's because it really doesn't.
6/28/24, 9:11 PM
A basically perfect story haha. Super hot sex, characters that feel alive, fun mind control... hope there's a dozen more chapters waiting in the wings. I especially like that the drone kink isn't erasing personalities for more than a few seconds at a time. I love the nanobots mind control thing, but when people talk like robots in the middle of sex it kinda loses me. This is a really fun mix of vibes!
Lucas
6/28/24, 9:00 PM
Thanks a lot for this great story, glad to see you back! By any chance, did you ever write any new chapter for _The Wrong Text_? This story made me cum so many, many times… Would love to see more chapters! Again, thank you for the story
Sss
6/28/24, 6:54 PM
I doubt the plan works on the others. Hypnosis is mind control. So they still get a choice.
Anonymous
6/28/24, 6:05 PM
Great story, this should be a video!!