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6/28/24, 10:31 PM
I don't get how you keep topping yourself like this. Must be a jock and a nerd ;) seriously though... I'm so impressed. And turned on. Congrats and thank you.
6/25/24, 6:32 AM
I don’t understand the dichotomy between our heroes thoughts of “So far the things he’d done would only affect them at home, but if he’d lost Chris’ girlfriend, that’d be going too far into ruining somebody’s life, somebody good to him at that.” And One of Charlie’s friends finally arrived, took one look at Mason, and went in for the kill. Mason did everything he could not to make eye contact, but the boy was persistent. He walked up, whispered something in Mason’s ear that seemed to make the man want to throw up, then smiled bashfully. Mason angrily, against his own will, led the boy up to his room to ‘talk some more“ followed by “ Mason stumbled down the stairs with a freshly fucked look on his face, along with a lot of resentment. His costume was a little messy, and his wig was askew, but he was otherwise no worse for wear; unless you counted the hickies on his chest. His little friend followed behind him, satisfied and smiling.” and “Mason’s friend slipped him a paper presumably bearing his phone number before disappearing into the crowd. Mason looked at it angrily before crumpling it up.” I understand that charlie is in love with Chris and not Mason but the author has mostly tried to portray charlie as not destroying the lives of his family. Somehow I find having Mason get raped by strangers to be pretty life and mind destroying. This is especially true as the way Charlie does it through Grindr and face to face meetings pretty much assures that this will make it well beyond the house. Tom

Hypno-boy
6/28/24, 9:32 PM
@[Thomas White](/user/show/10051527) I do think that's a good point, but I guess the point I was trying to get across was that Charlie felt some degree of remorse for wrecking things for Chris when Chris was only ever nice to him. Mason, who canonically made his life hell, is not entitled to that same sympathy at least from Charlie. Aside from that, being forced to do sexual things with your brothers would make you pretty fucked up in the head even if it wasn't public, so I think Charlie's reasoning is flawed on a number of levels. Charlie is a morally confused character. All of his actions thus far have been bad, including his actions to Chris. If you're thinking that his thought process doesn't make sense, that's because it really doesn't.
6/28/24, 9:11 PM
A basically perfect story haha. Super hot sex, characters that feel alive, fun mind control... hope there's a dozen more chapters waiting in the wings. I especially like that the drone kink isn't erasing personalities for more than a few seconds at a time. I love the nanobots mind control thing, but when people talk like robots in the middle of sex it kinda loses me. This is a really fun mix of vibes!
Lucas
6/28/24, 9:00 PM
Thanks a lot for this great story, glad to see you back! By any chance, did you ever write any new chapter for _The Wrong Text_? This story made me cum so many, many times… Would love to see more chapters! Again, thank you for the story
Sss
6/28/24, 6:54 PM
I doubt the plan works on the others. Hypnosis is mind control. So they still get a choice.
Anonymous
6/28/24, 6:05 PM
Great story, this should be a video!!
6/28/24, 5:32 PM
Intriguing setting and concept, I can tell that you've put a lot of thought into it so I'm looking forward to seeing you exploring it. Looks like there's going to be a lot of focus on the psychological aspects of the transformation, given you've got a cast of characters who don't feel like they have much going for them/don't feel they have much to look forward to I can see this getting pretty heavy. With the transformed objects seemingly reaching 'acceptance' hopefully things will end up more or less ok, but I suspect that it's a situation where things will get worse before they get better. Either way, I'm really curious to see what you have in store for this characters/how they'll develop going forward.
6/28/24, 5:09 PM
Zounds! What a tour-de-force!
hairyartist
6/28/24, 5:04 PM
Awesome, Thanks
6/28/24, 4:23 PM
wow fives across the board this is excellent