Recent Comments

6/28/24, 1:17 PM
Didn't mind the pictures, but the twist... feels a bit ridiculous. Struggling to see how all of this happened based on a file or two only.
6/28/24, 1:02 PM
I agree with the others. I want to know what happens next!
hairyartist
6/28/24, 11:50 AM
Thanks, I love it man
6/28/24, 10:47 AM
Poor Jack he has no idea what was in store for him. Hope you do a part two about what happened the next day.
6/27/24, 11:31 PM
Incredible. So sweet and sexy. The transformation aspect was hot. The ethical and consent dilemmas were well integrated. Your writing style and phrasing were spot-on. And, man… the attention to detail was just mind blowing. Great job. My compliments to the chef!

6/28/24, 10:06 AM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Thank you very much! I tossed up restructuring the first 8k words here. I'm really verbose and quite irreverent at the best of times, and I was worried about the amount of exposition I had here. But instead of rewriting, I realized I could do my best to channel Pratchett[^pratchettnote], and just kick my fanciful pleonasm into overdrive. I'm really glad that you appreciated the result. This chef has been very moved by your compliments. [^pratchettnote]: Specifically, his conversational diction in his narration, his irreverent approach to language, and the brilliant way his lighthearted, wholesome stories explore complex ethical dilemmas; an outstanding writer gone before his time.
6/28/24, 8:10 AM
I agree. Excellent idea and the story gets the motor running.
Anonymous
6/28/24, 6:56 AM
The AI pictures are…so bad..
6/28/24, 4:46 AM
Great story.
Anonymous
6/28/24, 4:43 AM
Super hot start. Love the slow manipulation
Anonymous
6/28/24, 4:43 AM
Great start! Keen to see where it goes