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6/25/24, 9:41 PM
I think this very hot series is making me accept my true nature…that I’m also really into older men and I can be myself around them more! Thank you !

6/26/24, 6:39 AM
@[Maxdc](/user/show/1580131) LOL the old men who have you should thank me instead ... But I'm glad you like the series! There's a lot more chapters coming up!
Martin
12/3/23, 6:03 AM
Hey Alpha, This story had been brought to my attention and I just read it the first time. I really enjoy your stories, but they're sometimes walking a thin line. I don't mind strong themes of power exchange and non-con stories, as long as they're sufficiently unrealistic. I've stated a couple of times that I couldn't live with the idea that someone takes a story on my sites as a blueprint on how to rape someone for real. This story is already published and I don't want to change that now. If you continue it, which I welcome, I'd appreciate it if you add an element that clearly puts it in the realm of fantasy. Like a whole factory of boy-slaves, which is so over the top, that it isn't realistic in any way anymore. Thank you.

6/26/24, 4:58 AM
@Martin I’ll make a note for future stories. I’m sorry. Didn’t mean to cause any issue.
6/26/24, 4:46 AM
awesome
6/26/24, 4:46 AM
Phewwwwf let's make this boy a good little fag!!
6/26/24, 4:27 AM
I vote g string
6/26/24, 4:16 AM
Great! Please add more!
2/14/24, 1:58 AM
Y’all are too kind. I’ve had this idea marinating in my head for a long time. The Mad Science prompt was the catalyst I needed to finally put it into words. By the way, this is the first erotic story I’ve ever written, and I’m absolutely blown away by the reception. Thank you to everyone.

6/26/24, 4:11 AM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Wow! Your first story and it was this good! You must be a regular writer outside of kink. If you need prompts I would be happy to give you some. or ideas
6/26/24, 3:12 AM
I too am keen for the next chapter asap!
6/26/24, 1:12 AM
This is an excellent story! You do a fantastic job setting up the main characters as despicable—especially when they plan to turn Dereck into a slave and steal everything from him—so it is very satisfying to see them fall victim to their own trap. An excellent karmic twist ending! One note, if I may, about word choice: a few times in the story you mention the characters massaging/feeling another man’s “breasts.” While men CAN have breasts, I think in this context you mean the chest muscles or nipples, so it may be better to use “pecs” (short for pectorals, the name for the chest muscles) in future stories. The tale is still incredible—wanted to make that small note. Thank you again and congratulations on your first story! :)

6/26/24, 3:03 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks a lot! The review is much appreciated, specially the pointers about wording. Will surely keep it in mind! :P
6/26/24, 2:10 AM
That was quite a story. Very hot