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6/26/24, 4:46 AM
awesome
6/26/24, 4:46 AM
Phewwwwf let's make this boy a good little fag!!
6/26/24, 4:27 AM
I vote g string
6/26/24, 4:16 AM
Great! Please add more!
2/14/24, 1:58 AM
Y’all are too kind. I’ve had this idea marinating in my head for a long time. The Mad Science prompt was the catalyst I needed to finally put it into words. By the way, this is the first erotic story I’ve ever written, and I’m absolutely blown away by the reception. Thank you to everyone.

6/26/24, 4:11 AM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Wow! Your first story and it was this good! You must be a regular writer outside of kink. If you need prompts I would be happy to give you some. or ideas
6/26/24, 3:12 AM
I too am keen for the next chapter asap!
6/26/24, 1:12 AM
This is an excellent story! You do a fantastic job setting up the main characters as despicable—especially when they plan to turn Dereck into a slave and steal everything from him—so it is very satisfying to see them fall victim to their own trap. An excellent karmic twist ending! One note, if I may, about word choice: a few times in the story you mention the characters massaging/feeling another man’s “breasts.” While men CAN have breasts, I think in this context you mean the chest muscles or nipples, so it may be better to use “pecs” (short for pectorals, the name for the chest muscles) in future stories. The tale is still incredible—wanted to make that small note. Thank you again and congratulations on your first story! :)

6/26/24, 3:03 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks a lot! The review is much appreciated, specially the pointers about wording. Will surely keep it in mind! :P
6/26/24, 2:10 AM
That was quite a story. Very hot
Gortontosh
6/26/24, 1:12 AM
Murr~ ♥️
6/25/24, 11:36 PM
Really well written Sir

6/26/24, 12:55 AM
@[FaggyBaby](/user/show/525906) Thanks, boy ;)