Bookmarked! I can't wait to see what filth these guys get up to! Always love your writing!

fuck hot, please more, more tricking

fucking hot story, more jock teammate trainings like that

This was an absolute blast.

Nice although I do wish it was longer and a bit better fleshed out. I would have also liked to see a slight difference in the was Daniel was controlled. Like you can still go for the pocket watch but maybe have Blake slightly sneaky to ambush him. He just seems to walk to and whip out his pocket watch and gets the guy to fall easily. I think Daniel who has concerns already about Toby would have had his guard up. But he seems to sit down with a stranger and switch his focus easily. You could have stretched and fixed the issue with him arriving and checking him out in his uniform being like you're wearing an actual butler uniform. And Toby goes of course I am Daniel what else would I wear. He tries to talk more with Toby but he insists he will be for now needs to focus on finishing dinner. And to go and relax have a glass of wine. Blake tries to make small talk to which Daniel would be a bit uncomfortable with but a glass of wine later, that Daniel tries to insist Toby doesn't have to pour but Toby insists he wants to sand not to worry himself just relax he loves doing this. Daniel sips at the wine while loosening his necktie and trying to still ask why a butler. Toby gives maybe answers like he loves the uniform and cleaning. He loves waking up everyday with a purpose and knowing what he was going to do. The wine was laced with drugs and starts taking effect and at that point Blake steps in to control the conversation and tries to focus on Daniel and drops how it he had that focus maybe his girlfriend wouldn't have left and his life in shambles. Daniel is taken Bank by Blake's bluntness and the fact he seems to know details of a private conversation and gets up to leave angry with both of them only to have a hard time moving. To which Blake says he's in no condition to drive and instructs Toby to take his keys away and return him to the dinner table next to him. He pulls out the pocket watch and calls out the time and calling Daniel a light weight but Daniel insists he's not drunk and asks what he put in the drink. Blake is playing with the pocket watch and catches Daniel locking on to the pocket watch and then the rest plays out. Obviously I would stretch it out but it would build to it a bit differently so the chapter isn't quiet the same. I feel you need a different transformation/mind control method or change up how you get to the same mind control.

Thank you guys for the support and suggestions, I really appreciate it. You guys are giving me a lot of ideas, and helping me improve my story telling skills.

This is quickly becoming an absolutely epic story. Great characters, hot sex, devious wish mechanics. Really loving it.

Amazing as always. Can't wait for the next chapter!

That was really nice and wholesome. Also very hot. I loved the twist in the middle and loved both the characters. If not for the author notes, I would’ve guessed who the author is. And if my guess was wrong, my next guess was that it was another author mimicking my first guess’s style. With the notes and the 4 year gap, I’m not sure at all.

Short and sweet :rofl: I was wondering what was going to happen to the cup, part of a well balanced breakfast!