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6/20/24, 9:27 PM
I’m not fond of gainer stories, but… for some reason… the ?twinning? aspect… is really cool!

6/22/24, 2:55 AM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) If you're able, are you more able to describe what you mean by "twinning aspect"? and thanks!

6/22/24, 5:21 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Hey! Thanks for the reply! I was just considering that Grant’s body type seemed to be growing similar to Euen’s. Also, Euen commented that, “I’ve been having such a good time engaging with my younger self in you…” midway through “Dinner And A Show.” Seeing your response, I guess becoming like “twins” is not the intent! It’s a good story! I attempt to figure in which direction the next chapter will go!

6/22/24, 1:02 PM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) It's complicated! The reason I asked is because I saw multiple things you could've meant by it, and wasn't sure if it was what I considered the obvious one (it was), or more of an undercurrent, but I like the appeal myself! Thanks! I've got a fair amount plotted out, but the exact form can still shift as I figure out what I want to write and what people are interested in. While I do like writing gainer stories myself, that's not the chief appeal of this one for me, as I hope will be clear in time.
6/22/24, 1:00 PM
Love the slow description of him loosing it. And the clever misspelling of words. Ur wrk jst mkes mE s0 hrd.
6/22/24, 12:03 PM
This is such a good story. i cannot wait to read more.
Anonymous
6/22/24, 11:26 AM
I hope the story will.continue!!!
Anonymous
6/22/24, 10:25 AM
I am thinking that Brian’s obsession with bring down Tyler is going to be HIS undoing. He made a wish about the pheromones and made Riley wish about the hypnosis but did not exempt himself. He already has begun smelling Riley so it will be fun to see if anything comes of that
6/21/24, 9:04 PM
Wait! Tyler wished that he, Noah and Joe would be protected from any type of mind control and hypnosis counts as a type of mind control!! So basically, even if they copy Brain's wish, Riley's new hypnotic abilities are useless unless they want to be hypnotized! Genius! I can't wait to see how they use this to their advantage, and how it will turn the tide.

6/21/24, 10:28 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I agree, i cant wait to see what will be Brian's reaction. He really gets to my nerve. He is a well written antagonist.

6/22/24, 9:19 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Yeah but Brian's wish... if they accept having the pheremones bit then they consent to the hypnosis, and Tyler's wish has that 'with consent' addendum. So who knows how that's going to go.
HypnoBoy
6/22/24, 6:01 AM
This was extremely hot!! Would love to see the MC getting too cocky for his own good tho. Maybe it is time for him to learn a lesson too

6/22/24, 7:17 AM
@[HypnoBoy](/user/show/10051407) Thanks for the read! I’m thinking of switching POV over to Lias. I’ve never written from a bottom’s perspective so I’ll have to see. My biggest question when it comes to the next chapter is whether people would want the reversal to be undone? Though at the moment, I’m thinking of taking things farther than the current power dynamic. Anyways, I’ve submitted a different story for review (I know, I’ve got my fingers in a lot of pies atm) so I’ll get back to this one now. I’ve got a general direction to go in plot-wise.
6/22/24, 7:04 AM
The best, as always!!!
6/22/24, 6:33 AM
Another well-written and fantastic chapter, the cyborg army is increasing. loved how the rubber coating envelops Tariq. i see an upgrade has happened, allowing an upgrade to be completed by sexual intercourse - wonder what is happening to the original cyborgs? maybe a signal can be sent to them to join the army. Maybe Tom, needs to be programmed to assist Alexei
Anonymous
6/22/24, 6:25 AM
G G Fantastic