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6/21/24, 7:59 PM
You go Javi! It's interesting to see how Riley's memories of Tyler have changed while still following the "only bad memories" command. At first he just forgot everything else but it seems he's starting to remember things once again through his anger. What I loved about this chapter is that even during the sinister plot part the story still remained wholesome and in some way also philosophical. Just so you know, you made a small mistake in one of your sentences, you wrote _"He hated how Riley seemed to know when Riley was crying, and would drag Riley to a movie or the gym or something to distract him"_ when I assume you meant to write _"He hated how **Tyler** seemed to know..."_

6/21/24, 8:13 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thank you for catching the typo. I always appreciate it, submitted the update. And yeah, I liked the idea that all of Riley's 'bad' memories of Tyler aren't actually bad because of Tyler, because Tyler isn't that type of guy. They are things that frustrate Riley, or reminders of Riley's own personal pain, but not actually bad things Tyler has done.
6/21/24, 7:46 PM
Very lovely and well-written story! I’m a sucker for those happy endings! Love the reality alteration aspects (also love how Andrew just kept growing and becoming hotter), but I also love the programming details and such. I don’t think I’ve read such a detailed chronivac story before with in depth programming aspects to it and it was definitely a plus in my opinion. one thing that kept leaving me to wonder was how despite the changes to the reality Blake’s crush on Andrew never faltered. Did Andrew set something (perhaps as a test?) before showing the program to Blake, making so Blake would have a crush on him, no matter how the reality changed afterward? It left me wonder. If not, it only makes the ending even more wholesome. It was a great read! Even if I usually prefer more sexual elements, the eroticism stood out just right with the plot and narrative around it! Great work!
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6/21/24, 7:29 PM
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6/21/24, 7:16 PM
Absolutely loved this story and I want to take a deep inhale of the contagious scent
6/19/24, 9:43 AM
Is this what you call slice of life? Whatever this genre is, I want more of it. Every time I see an update to this story, I actually leap for joy. There's just something so cozy and fun about this hot, gay incest story. Keep up the good work!

6/21/24, 6:58 PM
@[yetanotheranonymous](/user/show/971894) Very glad you've been enjoying it. I was actually a little worried this chapter would go over like a lead balloon since it's all plot.
6/21/24, 6:54 PM
That was great! I love the unreliable narrator, and the writing is excellent
6/21/24, 6:06 PM
What is the title for the one in this series? I can’t seem to find it on mcstories. At least give me an idea of what to search for since Area 51 is not coming up on the alphabetical list. Thx
6/18/24, 9:38 PM
Second time reading and enjoying. My Master and I are kink lifestylers (24/7 Master and pup, full-time in role and gear, 15 years now with 62 years of hardcore BDSM practice combined), and I _really_ like what you've got here. Jacob and David are well-drawn from the outset as you take us from introduction to exposition to their rapid "descent" from equally-matched buddies into a D/s dynamic at a cadence that might seem brisk compared to other stories in this genre. In real time, though, this is _exactly_ how quickly it develops. Your vivid depiction of David's reaction to the leather gear and Jacob's shift into a Master's posture makes it easy for us to buy into their fast-paced transformation every step of the way, primes the reader for J & D's interaction to intensify, and sets you up nicely for Chapter Two. Their interaction is _authentic_ - your affinity for our scene is clear; it brings an uncommon richness and depth that I love to see. And of course, the story is hardcore fun and the kink is hot AF :) Honestly, you made my night. It's clear that you "get" BDSM in a deep way, and the way my tail's wagging right now should tell you something :) Can't wait to read what's next, this is solid stuff, beautifully crafted with skill and care. Thank you. *awrrrrooooooo*

6/21/24, 4:45 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) This is one of the best comments I've ever gotten. Thank you so much. I'm a pretty clear cut switch so I was able to draw on both my sub side and Dom side to flesh out J & D, I'm really glad you found it both authentic and hot AF. I'm kind of jumping around from project to project as my ADHD allows, but I'm working on the next couple chapters for this. Outlining the long term plot but starting work on the next chapter. I don't want to rush this so I won't give an ETA but I'm hoping to publish the next chapter sometime in July. Not promising anything with Pride going on this month. Thank you again for such a kind and thoughtful comment. It really made my day.
6/21/24, 4:38 PM
This story is so great!!!! I dont know where I want it to go but so eager to find out what is going to happen
6/21/24, 4:36 PM
Such a fun chapter. All three parts were super sexy! Great story.