Recent Comments

6/21/24, 9:44 PM
I won't say this story is the best part of my Friday, but I look forward to it every week and it has yet to disappoint. Keep up the great work!
Anon
6/21/24, 9:23 PM
Brian chapters are the hottets
6/21/24, 1:37 AM
Yes very hot start! I’m sure I will enjoy every chapter, thanks!

6/21/24, 9:09 PM
@[Thycho](/user/show/10026130) there's going be a few. I think this is already turning into a full novel in my head lol
6/19/24, 4:45 AM
That was really great, looking forward to more.

6/21/24, 9:08 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) thanks mate
Anonymous
6/18/24, 10:27 PM
That was some really hot writing, looking forward to the next chapter.

6/21/24, 9:07 PM
@Anonymous thanks! New chapter will be up soon, ust got to edit it.
6/21/24, 8:53 PM
This was really hot!
6/21/24, 8:29 PM
Already shot a huge load to this barely halfway through, gonna have to come backa few more times man. Amazing work! :hot_face:
6/21/24, 7:59 PM
You go Javi! It's interesting to see how Riley's memories of Tyler have changed while still following the "only bad memories" command. At first he just forgot everything else but it seems he's starting to remember things once again through his anger. What I loved about this chapter is that even during the sinister plot part the story still remained wholesome and in some way also philosophical. Just so you know, you made a small mistake in one of your sentences, you wrote _"He hated how Riley seemed to know when Riley was crying, and would drag Riley to a movie or the gym or something to distract him"_ when I assume you meant to write _"He hated how **Tyler** seemed to know..."_

6/21/24, 8:13 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thank you for catching the typo. I always appreciate it, submitted the update. And yeah, I liked the idea that all of Riley's 'bad' memories of Tyler aren't actually bad because of Tyler, because Tyler isn't that type of guy. They are things that frustrate Riley, or reminders of Riley's own personal pain, but not actually bad things Tyler has done.
6/21/24, 7:46 PM
Very lovely and well-written story! I’m a sucker for those happy endings! Love the reality alteration aspects (also love how Andrew just kept growing and becoming hotter), but I also love the programming details and such. I don’t think I’ve read such a detailed chronivac story before with in depth programming aspects to it and it was definitely a plus in my opinion. one thing that kept leaving me to wonder was how despite the changes to the reality Blake’s crush on Andrew never faltered. Did Andrew set something (perhaps as a test?) before showing the program to Blake, making so Blake would have a crush on him, no matter how the reality changed afterward? It left me wonder. If not, it only makes the ending even more wholesome. It was a great read! Even if I usually prefer more sexual elements, the eroticism stood out just right with the plot and narrative around it! Great work!
Anonymous
6/21/24, 7:29 PM
superbe