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fred Ward
6/19/24, 11:22 AM
Very hot, it was great that Brandon could not help himself. Thanks for writing this

6/19/24, 2:14 PM
@fred Ward Thank you and thanks for leaving a message! Yeah, Brandon is caught in 2 minds about all the situations he finds himself in and I think that makes it all the more hotter! More situations to cum for Brandon! :sweat_drops:
6/19/24, 12:47 PM
Nice premise. Would definitely love to see more of the hypno fleshed out as I really like the change. Now can I get a pair?
6/19/24, 12:35 PM
Ooohhhh, quite a few twists in there! At first, I thought the twist would be that both roomates were in on it, but I was pleasantly surprised!
6/19/24, 9:29 AM
I love the story! Please continue! Maybe have them resist and struggle a bit, anyway, I can't wait for more
6/19/24, 8:56 AM
Oh, I was excited to leet the other three or four brothers, but we meet the sister instead? Nice! And Therma has quite the fun personality, and show a new, very creative use of the Pharaoh's powers! Wonderfully written and creative has always!!!!😀💚💚💚
6/19/24, 8:31 AM
Absolutely wonderful, so cruel to end the chapter there!:rofl:
6/18/24, 10:53 PM
This story is a lot of fun so far. I would like to see more of Chan being skeevy, using his employees as a private harem

6/19/24, 6:22 AM
@[Chesire cat](/user/show/10001871) Glad you're loving it. Not sure my Sam Chan is like that, but there's definitely a multi verse where he is
6/18/24, 8:54 PM
I never have anything clever to say with these comments but I very much enjoy this story! Always on the lookout for the next chapter!

6/19/24, 6:21 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) He he. Your honesty made me smile. Glad you enjoy it. Please rate it if you have the chance
Duskero
6/19/24, 5:53 AM
Not gonna lie, wish the socks played a bigger role personally. But maybe the captain can come grab me and change my mind.
6/17/24, 8:50 PM
Great! You *are* aware that multi-chapter stories are allowed in the contest, are you?

6/19/24, 12:07 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I had not intended to write multiple chapters, but now I'm thinking I might. Considering each chapter exploring one of the multiple possible interpretations of the prompt 'the wrong roommate,' all tied into these drones and nanobots, of course.

6/19/24, 4:41 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yay! Many hot hours ahead for us!