Recent Comments

6/18/24, 8:54 PM
I never have anything clever to say with these comments but I very much enjoy this story! Always on the lookout for the next chapter!

6/19/24, 6:21 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) He he. Your honesty made me smile. Glad you enjoy it. Please rate it if you have the chance
Duskero
6/19/24, 5:53 AM
Not gonna lie, wish the socks played a bigger role personally. But maybe the captain can come grab me and change my mind.
6/17/24, 8:50 PM
Great! You *are* aware that multi-chapter stories are allowed in the contest, are you?

6/19/24, 12:07 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I had not intended to write multiple chapters, but now I'm thinking I might. Considering each chapter exploring one of the multiple possible interpretations of the prompt 'the wrong roommate,' all tied into these drones and nanobots, of course.

6/19/24, 4:41 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yay! Many hot hours ahead for us!
6/19/24, 4:36 AM
GH ID 1292865 Finally getting into the groove where resource income exceeds expenditures so events go a bit more smoothly. (Managed to totally complete the Smash Effect event and get both guys!)
6/19/24, 3:26 AM
Very nice read. Thank you for the visions. Smiles
Anonymous
6/19/24, 3:09 AM
do you still plan on finishing this series? its ok if not! no pressure just wondering :3
6/19/24, 2:54 AM
Like OMG, I could so like totally become the total batch in this relationship. Giggles haha. Totally hot
6/19/24, 12:39 AM
Absolutely can’t wait for more!
Zac
6/18/24, 11:24 PM
Even hotter than the last chapter! Can't wait to see how far Brandon will be "encouraged" to go. Wonder if Coach is working with any of his teammates to "encourage" them in a similar fashion?

6/19/24, 12:08 AM
@[Zac](/user/show/948203) Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I'm kinda playing the long game and drafted about 20 chapters and so far, I'm still very much focused and in love with Brandon and the situations he is put in. There'll be tons of other old men (Tom and Lloyd!) but I'll definitely consider adding a teammate (or another jock) down the line!
Zac
6/18/24, 11:28 PM
Brandon must be thinking of Tom and Lloyd's offer more and more (and more...)

6/19/24, 12:02 AM
@[Zac](/user/show/948203) Hi Zac, I think Brandon has too much (old men? lol) on his mind now to think of Tom and Lloyd. But they'll be back. :stuck_out_tongue: