Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/24, 10:17 PM
This is such a great story so far! You really have something with this one!
6/18/24, 12:59 AM
I've been checking every day for this next installment. Reading it immediately makes my tiny cock stiff. So proud that Travis has become smaller than his boyfriend. And so glad they got to experience frotting each other. Hope they do it every moment alone from now on.

6/18/24, 10:10 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Alone? Bet they would be plenty of time to do it at work too. ;)
6/17/24, 1:47 PM
Please don’t leave us hanging, lol! This is excellent. Great writing, and kudos. We all can’t wait to read more.

6/18/24, 10:10 PM
@[Scott](/user/show/459693) Hopefully, it won't take too long to get the next part up. Glad you are enjoying it.
6/17/24, 9:44 AM
God I can't wait to see him get exposed

6/18/24, 10:09 PM
@[DannyStorm](/user/show/10002076) I'm sure it will be quite the show ;)
5/15/24, 6:32 PM
This was stellar! I have a leather dom buddy that I know will enjoy this story 😆😏 Thanks for posting, Great Read!!

Anonymous
5/15/24, 6:40 PM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Would you want to see your leather buddy as the leather daddy in this story hehe

5/16/24, 11:24 AM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Thanks MJO! I appreciate the compliments.

Anonymous
6/18/24, 8:13 PM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) I'm curious if you'd want go see you dom buddy as the daddy in this story hehe
6/18/24, 6:34 PM
So good to see you’re writing again. Can’t wait to see how this develops
6/18/24, 4:07 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, especially the cliffhanger “oh shit” moment at the end. I was engaged from the start and captivated by the end. I hope there is a follow up
Anonymous
6/18/24, 3:15 PM
Excited to see more!
Jun 15, 2024
Pcm
6/16/24, 9:41 AM
I find this story very erotic. Especially with how the son is put under his father's control, but instead of fully denigrating him, he is turned into a masculine "alpha" like his old man... It's too bad that we don't get to see the son's personality shift, how he becomes arrogant and cocky, unrepentantly flaunting his newfound alpha attitude alongside his dad at the gym or such stuff. Wonderful story!

6/16/24, 4:23 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Thank you very much, I tried to mix the commissioner's idea of turning the bullier into an even stronger and more arrogant man with my own (turning the son into an arrogant strong man). And you are right, I think it would have been better if I had exploited more the personality shift of the son.

AAA
6/17/24, 8:45 PM
@[NayarLeng](/user/show/10045868) There's nothing stopping you from picking a point in what you've written here and expanding from there on how the son experiences the changes. ;)

6/17/24, 11:25 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) I don't know if it would be ethical. I mean, someone paid me to write this story :sweat_smile: He gave me the idea, I just put my brain and fingers to work (and made some adjustments, actually, the fact of turning the son into a jock was my addition), but the idea was his. With this comment and a previous one, I thought of a continuation, but I don't know if it's good to write it.

Pcm
6/18/24, 8:48 AM
@[NayarLeng](/user/show/10045868) Just my two cent, but I think you can always expand on the latter half (the bullied becomes a jock and joins his bullier with incestuous twist) which is your original idea into a new story if you want?

NayarLeng
6/18/24, 1:49 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Either way I asked him, so crossed fingers :crossed_fingers: