Update please

Hey there! Thank you for taking the time to write this. I do appreciate and completely understand what you're saying. In fact, pretty much everthing you say is correct...but not for the reasons you're thinking. First, thank you for firstly enjoying my work and, secondly, being bothered enough to let me know that the images take something away for you. However...haha. ok, so please bear in mind that this series is commissioned. The commissioner specifically requests I include images...and therefore, i do! Not all my stories have images but if someone wants them I'm happy to oblige. You are also correct in that sometimes the descriptions are less detailed. This is not because i am using the images as a crutch or overly relying on them - it's a simple matter of word count. My stories tend to be particularly character-heavy, that's how i prefer to write. I simply do not have space to describe every single transformation in detail; i already went over by several thousand words here. In this way, the images can take up some of the slack for me. It is also a matter of pacing. The idea is that the original transformation is more longwinded and then as things progress the pace quickens. You did notice this, and it was purposeful, not laziness. I guess the idea just didn't translate well...more improvement needed. I did write a story with no images where i describe every single TF in huge detail. It ended up at almost 30k words...thats just not doable every time. I never uploaded it here but it can be found on Furaffinity where I upload all of my stories minus images. You can download them from there without those pesky image links. Or, of course, not click the link at all. I totally get what you're saying, and it concerns me that the images ruin the story for you. I have had other comments from people who have said the images helped them to visualise...it's a personal thing. I will still include images in some of my stories. I enjoy creating them and enjoy using them. As for the quality...that's not anything i have control over but i do try to use half decent ones. Again, i do appreciate you reaching out with your concerns and am saddened that it takes away from your enjoyment. Feel free to email me if you want to say more. I'm open to all feedback.

Please continue this saga, it was so hot

Good story as usual. I've been meaning to say this for a while, but i think your stories are better when you don't use AI images. Let me explain. The first chunk of your story has no linked image, but you describe in detail what is happening, how the coach feels, and what he looks like when he transforms. I can clearly picture what he looks like in my head, so i don't need the pictures. When it does show up in kind of distracts from the story because it feels much more generic and less real than what you had been describing. Not only that, but as the story goes on and you link more images more often, the descriptions get weaker and more vague as you rely more and more on the images to do the work for you. And this has happened in previous stories as well, where you've either glossed over or ommited certain descriptions entirely because the images are there, which has led to the story being dependant on the images and over all weaker. Another issue is that what you are describing often looks nothing like the images you include. Characters are often smaller or their features are different than what I'm being told they should look like. That's not even getting into the uncanny valley of the humans. And yes, part of the issue is that the images are AI generated. I'm not going to moralize here, but go into a practical issue. With images created by people, you want to look closer and examine every little detail. With AI images you want to do the exact opposite, because the closer got look, the more likely you are to find something completely fucked up. In your stories I've seen penises that look like fingers and butthair that spirals into the void. Even in this story, you have what looks like sweatpants fused into genitals. There are more things i could go into, how it messes with the pacing of your stories or how it makes things feel more samey, but this is already going long. You're a good writer and i enjoy your stories, but the AI images are a crutch that weakens your writing. I'm sure other readers will disagree with me and you have no reason to listen to what i'm saying, but i really do think you should stop relying on AI and let your words speak for themselves. They're such good words, after all, and i think they're worth more than a thousand images.

Really enjoyed this whole series; Jake’s backstory was perfectly set up.

What is going on??? So, he's in a relationship with Sebastian, and the 6 guys were his friends...but the ending just confused me and gave me more questions than answers. Please tell me there is more?

I'm a gay man and i love this story about mind control, humiliation, feminization, cock shrinking and submission. It got me very hard and let me cum twice. Very good, that i have read it

This is getting hotter and hotter.

What a great story, the way John toys with Chris is what I've always dreamed of doing. Truly amazing! 😍

WOW , I need more !