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Jagoda
6/17/25, 3:18 PM
Please continue this saga, it was so hot
6/17/25, 1:07 PM
Good story as usual. I've been meaning to say this for a while, but i think your stories are better when you don't use AI images. Let me explain. The first chunk of your story has no linked image, but you describe in detail what is happening, how the coach feels, and what he looks like when he transforms. I can clearly picture what he looks like in my head, so i don't need the pictures. When it does show up in kind of distracts from the story because it feels much more generic and less real than what you had been describing. Not only that, but as the story goes on and you link more images more often, the descriptions get weaker and more vague as you rely more and more on the images to do the work for you. And this has happened in previous stories as well, where you've either glossed over or ommited certain descriptions entirely because the images are there, which has led to the story being dependant on the images and over all weaker. Another issue is that what you are describing often looks nothing like the images you include. Characters are often smaller or their features are different than what I'm being told they should look like. That's not even getting into the uncanny valley of the humans. And yes, part of the issue is that the images are AI generated. I'm not going to moralize here, but go into a practical issue. With images created by people, you want to look closer and examine every little detail. With AI images you want to do the exact opposite, because the closer got look, the more likely you are to find something completely fucked up. In your stories I've seen penises that look like fingers and butthair that spirals into the void. Even in this story, you have what looks like sweatpants fused into genitals. There are more things i could go into, how it messes with the pacing of your stories or how it makes things feel more samey, but this is already going long. You're a good writer and i enjoy your stories, but the AI images are a crutch that weakens your writing. I'm sure other readers will disagree with me and you have no reason to listen to what i'm saying, but i really do think you should stop relying on AI and let your words speak for themselves. They're such good words, after all, and i think they're worth more than a thousand images.
6/17/25, 4:34 AM
Really enjoyed this whole series; Jake’s backstory was perfectly set up.

6/17/25, 8:43 AM
@[mocigarbro](/user/show/10063637) Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
6/16/25, 1:12 AM
What is going on??? So, he's in a relationship with Sebastian, and the 6 guys were his friends...but the ending just confused me and gave me more questions than answers. Please tell me there is more?

6/17/25, 5:39 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It does...and it makes me eager for the next chapter. You've had me hooked since the first chapter. I'm dying to get to the ending. Can't wait for more.
6/17/25, 8:18 AM
I'm a gay man and i love this story about mind control, humiliation, feminization, cock shrinking and submission. It got me very hard and let me cum twice. Very good, that i have read it
6/17/25, 8:08 AM
This is getting hotter and hotter.
Elm
6/17/25, 2:59 AM
What a great story, the way John toys with Chris is what I've always dreamed of doing. Truly amazing! 😍
Rough Rider
6/17/25, 1:39 AM
WOW , I need more !
6/15/25, 4:30 PM
This is a fucking masterpiece. Good lord. Rock hard the ENTIRE time. (APPLAUSE)

6/15/25, 7:38 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Wow, it's such an honor to have you read my story. I'm subscribed to your Ko-Fi, can't wait to see more stories!

6/16/25, 3:14 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Thank you for your support too! Suffice it to say that I'm really excited to find out who you are and I'll be reading all your other stories too! You're very talented with compelling and erotic storytelling!

6/16/25, 9:38 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I'm excited too (let me know if it's better to wait, or I can message you on Ko-Fi, maybe you'd let me work on your massage story from awhile back???)

6/17/25, 12:40 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Feel free to message on Ko-fi!! I promise the boos here that I won't reveal anything. And I'd love to hand over one of my MANY incomplete stories to someone I can absolutely trust with it!!
6/15/25, 8:59 PM
Uh oh. I live in Cedar Rapids, Iowa.

6/15/25, 9:08 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) 🤣🤣🤣 Love it! Wonder if you'll hear the howls tonight!

6/16/25, 11:41 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Owwww owwww