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Anonymous
6/18/24, 2:42 AM
I loved everything from the writing to concept to characters. Andrew is an intriguing character, especially given that we mostly learn about him through context. Would love to learn more about him in future additions/chapters. Thanks for sharing!

Anonymous
6/18/24, 2:57 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! I’ll share more soon! Andrew actually shows up in another series (which I still haven’t finished yet :sweat: ) but with this new story I’m debating adding one last chapter to the original series to wrap that story arc up. Try a different approach than I originally had planned

6/18/24, 3:00 AM
@Anonymous Oops. I was logged out… my bad 😅
6/18/24, 2:50 AM
This deserves a continuation!
6/17/24, 2:02 PM
Can’t wait for the next chapter! I hope the hypnosis continues where he still think this is all training to become a better swimmer and that there are more things older men can do to him, maybe have him be available to perform services for them on-call.

6/18/24, 12:44 AM
@[Rspark](/user/show/911815) Hi Rspark, thank you for commenting! Brandon will definitely be finding himself in more "adventures" where there'll be plenty of older men who have their designs on him. lol. Coach Thompson will of course "assist" in that endeavor... I do want to develop his hypnosis to be more than that and over time, more of a brainwash. Chapter 3's out soon!
6/17/24, 7:29 AM
Awesome story man. So hot! Hope you continue it! Would be so hot to see MC get more cocky and arrogant or Lias dealing with his new perspective

6/18/24, 12:37 AM
@[Kane Swift](/user/show/121637) Thank you for reading it! I’m thinking of writing a part two but I’m still unsure on what direction I’d want to go in. I’ve got a couple different ideas but each one is a complete opposite of the other. I’ll see how well this one does and go from there
Anonymous
6/14/24, 6:13 PM
Hey, don't give up on this series! A few interesting new combinations of time-stop victims are possible!

6/18/24, 12:39 AM
@Anonymous Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback and don't worry about that, I'll be updating all my series soon ;)
6/18/24, 12:03 AM
i love Domination-control/submission-service themes, and your story completely satisfies that fetish for me. Well...maybe not completely. For that i will need additional chapters! Regarding your concern about fetishes, personally i don't understand why certain types of sexual, aesthetic, and cultural preferences should be disparaged like they often are. For example, i find the idea of connecting with races and cultures other than my own exotic and exciting. The differences make things more interesting.
Rubberspiraldronthiago
6/17/24, 11:16 PM
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6/17/24, 4:07 PM
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6/17/24, 11:16 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Glad it worked for you!
6/17/24, 10:51 PM
God I love the interactions between the Caseys! Would love to see more of Wang if it's in the cards but no matter what it was amazing to read
6/17/24, 10:44 PM
Damn that was hot. I can see some corruption in the future. Can the nanobots feel pleasure and want to take over Alex? Will Alex take a backseat to Prime and create his own army of over muscled sex slaves to dominate mankind?