Recent Comments

6/17/24, 8:00 PM
Great plot twist! I'm now much more intrigued about where this story is heading.
thesaxcat
6/15/24, 7:59 PM
I really am invested and hope things turn out somewhat ok in the end for these guys. Thanks for writing a great story.

6/15/24, 9:35 PM
@[thesaxcat](/user/show/10005285) Thank you very much, I'm glad you've enjoyed it! There _is_ a 'good ending' nearly done, but I've been stuck dealing with some real-life work that has eaten into my writing time. It shouldn't be _too much longer_^TM^ :sweat_smile:

thesaxcat
6/17/24, 6:06 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Totally understand!

6/17/24, 7:08 PM
@[thesaxcat](/user/show/10005285) Thanks :3
Miitshi
6/17/24, 6:24 PM
A bit late, but I need to say how awesome this saga was! This concept really pushes all my buttons, great work! 💜🔥
6/17/24, 4:55 PM
I miss this story so much. Hoping the author can return to it someday. We'll be here waiting!
Anonymous
6/17/24, 4:27 PM
Abysmal story, thoroughly unerotic and just a bit too sad to be enjoyable otherwise. Hopefully this was written w AI
6/17/24, 12:58 PM
It is worth noting that you have a few points in this chapter where you switch betweeen calling Blair B-1 and B-2, sometimes in the same paragraph. Worth considering.

6/17/24, 3:57 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) Thank you so much for your help! I've corrected the errors.
Muscle-Flex
6/17/24, 12:23 AM
This story really hits that sweet spot between the humorous and the hot. I enjoy laughing at Casey's predicament while getting turned-on by what is happening to the big he-man star at the same time. Well done!

6/17/24, 3:43 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thank you! Hope there are some twists and turns ahead to keep you intrigued.
5/19/24, 4:38 AM
One of the most creative concepts I've seen on here in years.

6/17/24, 3:43 PM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) My blushes. :)
5/19/24, 12:12 AM
S.Q, it would absolutely be remiss of me if I didn't commend you for this story. Well-written, funny, full of character and life. Your casual writing style really serves the narrative and Casey's characterization well. The whole "sex/corrupted phone app" trope has been done before, but you've really notched it up to the next level with your adaptability in how much you allow the audience to shape and mold your story. Very well done, and I'm really looking forward to participating in this myself and seeing how the story expands and changes as we move forward. Great job, dude!

6/17/24, 3:43 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) What a welcome comment--thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying Casey's misadventures. I've been surprised at how much of its own life this story has taken on.
Anonymous
5/18/24, 4:15 AM
I felt the "cheating" part was out of line for the app. Casey legit found a loophole. The app should've been pouty, but it should've played fair. If it isn't playing fair, the story twists from being a challenge for your main character to manage and possibly overcome to simply wish-fulfillment sadism. For me, it completely removes the interesting part of the story: the game to be played.

Anonymous
5/18/24, 10:01 AM
@Anonymous I fully agre with this, the phrasing didn't say it had to stay up or how he had to do it, just that he had to post something sexually revealing online, hell he could've done it with a burner or anonymously and it'd be within the rules but with him not being able to think or have the time that wouldn't have worked.

5/18/24, 10:19 AM
@Anonymous I'm also disappointed he lost the challenge, but I haven't thought of it like that. Learning how to beat the app in its own game could be an interesting development that still offer hot scenarios while not leaving Casey as a "punching bag" for the app and its developers.

6/17/24, 3:42 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I very honestly didn't think this would be an issue, hm! Hopefully the resolution of why this is there is satisfying, in the end.