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6/17/24, 1:50 PM
Looking at the tags, I have strong suspicions about who the writer is. Unless it's a first-time entry. We get a few of those every contest. Very hot and fun to read, in any case.💚 Would love a follow-up some day.
6/17/24, 12:28 PM
I feel like this story could benefit from a change of perspective in future chapters. You could pick up the narrative a couple of weeks later with a different focalizing character--perhaps someone who'd be naturally inclined to investigate, like an MI6 agent or one of Frank's colleagues on the police force--and have them gradually learn about the growing cyborg army. That would give the story an element of suspense that it's currently lacking; right now, it feels like nearly every part of the story follows these beats: "Tom tells us the next component of his plan... that plan goes off without a hitch." So even though I love the premise, and I think there's some interesting characterization, I'm finding it hard to get invested in the story itself.

6/17/24, 12:35 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Funny you should say that, because that's exactly the kind of thing I have in mind for chapter 4, which I'm just editing now and should be available in a few hours.
Jun 15, 2024
6/17/24, 10:10 AM
damn hot!!
JX
6/8/24, 6:29 PM
update soon?

6/9/24, 2:30 PM
@JX Hi. I'm only half way for the next chapter. Seems like I'll be releasing Ch.18 first before the Ch.2 of Supercop. It might take a few weeks though.

JX
6/17/24, 9:57 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Great! can’t wait to see what happens next and Dexter’s new dynamic having a mansion all to himself!
6/17/24, 2:53 AM
That corndog part was everything for me 😂🥵

Hypno-boy
6/17/24, 9:50 AM
@[GemGemmini](/user/show/351392) lol
6/17/24, 7:19 AM
I love the slow seductive power shift. Once Alex started developing a crush on David, became obligated to David for his tutoring, and then humiliated by being caught wearing David's preppy clothes, his fate was pretty much sealed. Still i need to experience the complete power shift and David's total control, so please keep up with this story! If it pleases you, I'll even wear preppy clothes to be able to read more!
6/17/24, 4:47 AM
This was friggin outstanding.
6/17/24, 3:38 AM
Was this going to continue?
Zac
6/16/24, 5:52 PM
Love the tease and how all of the touching and attention build up Brandon's need and desire. He should find himself needing more and more attention and feeling a greater need to expose himself to get it, maybe starting with showing himself off on-cam but then feeling the need to enter amateur night at a local gay strip joint and discovering just home much he _loves_ that attention, as men brush bills across his body and slip them into his tiny g-string, all of them staring at him with lust in their eyes. Oops. Guess I need to re-read it all and JO again! 😝

6/17/24, 2:54 AM
@[Zac](/user/show/948203) Hi Zac, thank you for your comment and suggestion! Rest assured I've got Brandon needing and craving the attention from all the lustful older men. Would definitely include your idea of the strip club down the road... need to throw Brandon in more "innocent" scenarios first before he makes a fully independent decision to go to a gay strip club... I'm playing the long game! lol As a little teaser, Brandon will be posing for an art class the next chapter! :stuck_out_tongue: Your comment and of course, JO makes writing this all worth it!!! Thanks again! :sweat_drops:
Anonymous
6/15/24, 7:05 PM
Anybody else feeling like they have a case of blue balls waiting for part 9??

6/17/24, 1:23 AM
@Anonymous Believe it or not, I have a bad habit where I get so focused on writing the next part, but I forget to post the part I've already finished.