Recent Comments

6/8/24, 8:36 PM
Best story on this whole site - well done!

6/17/24, 1:22 AM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Glad to hear you're enjoying it!
Xackery
6/13/24, 11:03 PM
Why am I crying. What the fuck. This is beautiful.

6/17/24, 12:27 AM
@Xackery I'm glad this piece moved so many people. :heart:
Muscle-Flex
6/16/24, 11:43 PM
Just wait until Jack gets home the next morning to find out that Monty has moved in with lots of humiliating plans for the big stud, starting with directing his attention to the morning news on TV - showing video of the scene at the ferris wheel yesterday. This was a fun story! Great job.

Hypno-boy
6/17/24, 12:18 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thanks for the feedback! Also, I think having to rewatch the whole ordeal would be the least of his concerns ;)
Muscle-Flex
6/17/24, 12:17 AM
This is a really clever idea. I love the game scenario. I'm hooked and looking forward to the next chapter!
thesaxcat
6/16/24, 10:41 PM
Well. That was amazing. Perhaps we get a second chapter after the challenge?
6/16/24, 5:38 PM
My hunch on where the story was going was definitely wrong. Blurry memory, missing pants, "Kingsley held the only key". In an alternate reality continuation, Joseph would pull out Kingsley's pants, with the key, "surprise!" and he'd get another shot at usurpation. Although I guess in that alternate reality he'd want another shot, rather than being glad to have lost.

6/16/24, 8:59 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Well, I'm always glad to subvert reader's expectations, haha! > Although I guess in that alternate reality he’d want another shot, rather than being glad to have lost. We shall see. We have a lot of stories to tell and more characters to get to. I think Joseph is very bullheaded, and it may take a few more knocks for him to realize his place...
6/16/24, 7:55 PM
Awesome story, got me going in an instant! Great early entrant in the story challenge!
6/16/24, 7:14 PM
The next morning: *communications link established*
*Unit 10,423 reporting to prime*
*Unit 10,423 now serving as initial mesh node for full collective communication*
6/16/24, 6:56 PM
I just love this dumb muscle fucker. I hope Mr. Chan and Ahmed have lots more planned for him.

6/16/24, 6:59 PM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Glad you're loving it. And yeah, they have plenty of fun planned for Mr Johnson, don't worry