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Anonymous
6/13/24, 11:26 PM
Masons my fave :star_struck:
Anonymous
6/13/24, 9:33 PM
Any chance this story will be continued?
6/13/24, 9:03 PM
It' such an HOT story, damn!
6/13/24, 8:53 PM
Great start! I can imagine a lot of erotic directions this story might head towards...
6/13/24, 7:37 PM
Oh man, that last sentence holds sooo many promises.. Can't wait to read more!
Zac
6/13/24, 7:25 PM
Slaves for life becuz you say!
6/13/24, 7:04 PM
Really happy (and horny) to see these kinds of stories popping up, good work!
6/13/24, 3:44 PM
I really enjoyed this story! There's a bit of confusion toward the end of the text about Andy's name, which switches to Alex a couple of times.

6/13/24, 6:15 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thanks so much for your help! I've corrected the errors and it should be updated soon. I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far.
6/13/24, 6:07 PM
Once again, you show why you are the best writer in this genre. Excellent from start to finish. Will John make tge connection between Eden and the failed attemp to recruit him yo there? That woukd be fun. Anyways, whatever you decide to do with these dudes you created will always be the best direction because there is no one better than you and no reading experience more like have a mule sized jock dock in your brain than an Eden chapter.