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6/12/24, 7:47 AM
Hi. I think Steif is hot, but given that the shards drop very infrequently, I am not sure I will be able to get him. :( GH ID 1130750 GPSH ID 4658
6/12/24, 5:51 AM
Well that was certainly a lot. It’s tough to not feel empathetic, especially after a physical beating

6/12/24, 7:17 AM
@[Camo Brute](/user/show/588361) Yes, I am trying to incorporate more of a everyday life being some what normal.
9/23/23, 1:55 AM
If there was one story I’d hope to see updated, it would be this gem!

6/12/24, 7:08 AM
@AnonDog Same
6/11/24, 10:42 PM
Not you playing with my heartstrings like that, Twan. First I was excited when I saw the title, dismayed when I saw the summary, even sadder when I saw where it was going, only to be lifted up again by the ending! What an outstanding series, Twan! Even with such a simple premise, you managed to bring loads of character, charm, and pure sexiness into these chapters. Each chapter surpasses the last in terms of hotness and quality. Each ounce of raunch was matched with stellar characterization in how the bros came to accept Leo as one of their own and cared for him. Just all very well-written and one of my favorites. You should take a lot of pride in what you've written here, very well done!

6/12/24, 7:08 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thank you so much 😭 seriously, I feel so humbled reading that because I kept delaying and delaying this feeling like it wasn't an appropriate ending. I am really, really glad you enjoyed it, seriously.
6/11/24, 11:45 PM
This was quite hot. Though I'd prefer to be Ken. Also the twins need a daddy of their own. Lol

6/12/24, 7:07 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you, Heru! And you never know! But for now I'm done with this series.
6/11/24, 10:55 PM
Good begining!

6/12/24, 5:03 AM
@[Chriscamx](/user/show/10015580) Right!!
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6/12/24, 3:41 AM
Awesome setup, can’t wait for part two!
6/12/24, 2:02 AM
Enjoying this series so far, your character interactions are so fun to read!
6/12/24, 1:11 AM
Great story, Hypnothrill! It was great reading another story of yours!!
6/11/24, 11:31 PM
Another great rewrite. This chapter focusing entirely on Jasper and Rhys after the ceremony and the bonding of the night and morning is a great addition. The way it entwines a way for Rhys to learn more about the slums and what Jasper had to deal with -- particularly after they talk about just getting over it to be a pet and not hit Coins who grab -- and to show he's keeping his promise and invested in it. The disbelief he experiences when he sees the river up close is really powerful. A far cry from the idyllic glittering view from up on high without detail. I still love the way Rhys gets to see Jasper in his element and he's still got street instincts despite petdom. That Rhys lets his pet take the reins says so much about their relationship and that's what gets them out safely. The mounting exhibitionism and sluttiness Jasper is demonstration is so very hot and his oral fixation too. I have to reiterate how much I love your work.