Recent Comments

6/12/24, 12:54 PM
One hell of an ending. Got me tearing up at the end there. Fantastic work. And I just say incredibly hot. So wish I could be in his position <3 Bravo

6/12/24, 1:14 PM
@[HypnoJ](/user/show/974897) Thank you so much 💜 I'm really glad you liked it.
Bryce
6/12/24, 1:12 PM
the wrap up in the tattoo parlour is hot with the mutual admiration of each other; as well as the hint of darkness.
Anonymous
6/12/24, 12:41 PM
so glad Vice-Principal Johnson saw sense… and Frank transformation was sooo hot!!!
Anonymous
6/12/24, 12:32 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter. Really hot.
6/12/24, 11:56 AM
Wow! This is excellent! You have created a believable dystopia and started a very hot, well-written story. As someone who has quite a few series on here myself, I'd be proud if I had written this. I can't wait for the next episode in Justin and Egan's story. Please do not make us wait too long! :grinning:
Ben
6/12/24, 8:34 AM
Interesting concept! Made me cum 🔥
6/12/24, 7:47 AM
Hi. I think Steif is hot, but given that the shards drop very infrequently, I am not sure I will be able to get him. :( GH ID 1130750 GPSH ID 4658
6/12/24, 5:51 AM
Well that was certainly a lot. It’s tough to not feel empathetic, especially after a physical beating

6/12/24, 7:17 AM
@[Camo Brute](/user/show/588361) Yes, I am trying to incorporate more of a everyday life being some what normal.
9/23/23, 1:55 AM
If there was one story I’d hope to see updated, it would be this gem!

6/12/24, 7:08 AM
@AnonDog Same
6/11/24, 10:42 PM
Not you playing with my heartstrings like that, Twan. First I was excited when I saw the title, dismayed when I saw the summary, even sadder when I saw where it was going, only to be lifted up again by the ending! What an outstanding series, Twan! Even with such a simple premise, you managed to bring loads of character, charm, and pure sexiness into these chapters. Each chapter surpasses the last in terms of hotness and quality. Each ounce of raunch was matched with stellar characterization in how the bros came to accept Leo as one of their own and cared for him. Just all very well-written and one of my favorites. You should take a lot of pride in what you've written here, very well done!

6/12/24, 7:08 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thank you so much 😭 seriously, I feel so humbled reading that because I kept delaying and delaying this feeling like it wasn't an appropriate ending. I am really, really glad you enjoyed it, seriously.