Recent Comments

9/15/25, 5:03 AM
Your stories are the hottest! I love how clueless Bryce was and how he slowly changed. You're so talented.
Sep 15, 2025
9/15/25, 4:31 AM
Love a nice massive sack on a guy. Can't wait for more!
9/15/25, 2:42 AM
Love seeing his progression and lack of awareness. Thanks for writing and I hope you can keep going
8/6/25, 3:00 AM
I love to imagine that now david has jadon, he would left ryan posed as a statue a lot and be ignored like an object cast aside, forgotten.

9/15/25, 12:49 AM
@[Frstone](/user/show/42866) Can totally see that
9/15/25, 12:13 AM
I am loving this. I would love this for myself.
Nov 18, 2024
9/14/25, 11:41 PM
Super hot, bring more cum hungry zombies.
9/14/25, 11:20 PM
So fucking hot! I pray you one day become inspired to add much more to this story. Fucking loved it! Thanks man
9/12/25, 8:31 PM
Your stories get better and better ... BBC Society and now this! Thank you!

9/14/25, 11:20 AM
@[Antnee](/user/show/10043490) Thank you all for your kind words. I am still trying to figure out what works well and what does not so I really appreciate the feedback.

Anonymous
9/14/25, 2:26 PM
@[Hypnomic](/user/show/10059276) This works! All of it does.

Willie Cici
9/14/25, 9:49 PM
@[Hypnomic](/user/show/10059276) You're doing a great job! Remember: when you write, you write for YOUR pleasure. If other people enjoy your stories, that's great. If you are writing to please the readers, you may end up disappointing yourself. I don't see that happening with this story line. This has so much potential. Especially for plot twists and unexpected turns.

@Antnee
9/14/25, 10:33 PM
@Willie Cici Agreed and well said. I spend so much time FINDING writing to my (very specific) needs I sometimes forget to leave a thank you. Or make a comment. I have a few of yours Bookmarked/Favorited and read so many more from those. Fans are hard to understand but yours and the writing here is exceptional.
9/14/25, 9:54 PM
Thanks very much for your kind comments. They do spur me on to write more. I have submitted the next chapter, 'Fundamental Changes' on 14.09.25, so it is likely to be available to read from 18.09.25. I hope you enjoy it.

9/14/25, 10:18 PM
@[Librogiallo](/user/show/10008628) ❤️
9/14/25, 7:35 PM
This is weird ... and hot as fuck for some reason. Not exactly my kink, but I still want to learn how this continues! BTW, you have a typo in your story's title!

9/14/25, 10:11 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, I know it's weird, and it's a new thing for me. Just hit publish from chapter one of another PoolToy story. Oh, and thanks for the heads up on the typo. I missed that one.