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nobody
5/3/24, 2:35 AM
GH ID 22226

Gay Harem
6/11/24, 10:00 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Hi there! Thank you for playing our games ! Rewards for you! 🤩
6/11/24, 7:55 AM
Fun, can't wait to see more.
6/11/24, 7:11 AM
I'd buy that cock 🐽🥵🤤
6/11/24, 5:57 AM
Absolutely phenomenal. I wasn't sure about the highly decorative choice in vocabulary at first but it definitely served well to illustrate the mental state of the protagonist.
HypnoMutt
6/8/24, 10:18 AM
Amazing, fun, compelling, twisted... loving every word. How are you managing to keep the "wish matrix" consistent? Every chapter brings new layers of conditions that interact in complex ways with every wish that's come before - do you have a process chart or a guide that you're using, or are you working it out as you write? (If you don't want to discuss trade secrets, understandable, but if you want to share in the forum or the Discord chat, I'd love to know more - thanks!)

6/8/24, 1:29 PM
@HypnoMutt Lol. The only problem with revealing the 'magic' behind my writing process is revealing that there isn't much magic. Like most of my stories, this one started as late-night or early-morning daydreams. The stories I tell myself before I go to bed or as I'm waking up. I mentally wrote and re-wrote key scenes and hot scenes (initial wishes, Tyler + Brian's first sex scene, Joe + Noah's endless sex, the Brits in the bathroom, a few others like the ending) countless times just in my head. Then, when I decided to actually start writing it down instead of daydreaming about it, I created a notes file in Google where I fleshed out character names (everyone is nameless in my head until I start writing) and created a day-by-day wish tracker. I wrote down every day and every character's name, and I knew, based on the ending, which wishes *needed* to happen. The initial horny/uninhibited/gay/obedience/knowledge wishes, Joe's wish for endless sex as an excuse for them to not immediately reverse the gay wish, Tyler's wish for Javi to have a physical form this chapter, a few more to come. Then I filled in the blanks in my list with fun and sometimes-twisted sex wishes I wanted to write into scenes. Then I filled in the scenes. Several of my favorite scenes were not planned and happened organically. The initial Mateo and Ramon scene with Tyler, for example, was me creating a contrast to how an empathetic person would use the seduction wish vs Brian and the Brits (which I had planned from the start), but then I ended up loving those characters. As I actually wrote the wishes, I replaced my general "Brian wishes to be able to seduce anyone" in my notes with the exact words. Now I just copy/paste that part of my notes to the end of every chapter to share with you guys.

6/11/24, 5:51 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Thanks so much for this insight into your process and for taking the time to write! Very informative - and inspiring :)
6/11/24, 5:14 AM
Thanks man! It's great to have you back. Please, continue. You're a great writer and I really enjoy it.
6/11/24, 4:47 AM
This is awesome.
6/11/24, 4:43 AM
Welcome back! (I guess, since this is my first time reading your story. Just new reader here) Anyway, love the story concept and it is very hot. Hope you continue updating it. Maybe you could add Chris and Will to the mix.
6/11/24, 4:35 AM
What a treat! Surprised that I hadn't seen any of your previous chapters before today.. my good fortune to read them all in one sitting! This is brilliant, I'm hooked. Thank you!
thesaxcat
6/11/24, 1:58 AM
please, please PLEASE keep going!