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HypnoMutt
6/8/24, 10:18 AM
Amazing, fun, compelling, twisted... loving every word. How are you managing to keep the "wish matrix" consistent? Every chapter brings new layers of conditions that interact in complex ways with every wish that's come before - do you have a process chart or a guide that you're using, or are you working it out as you write? (If you don't want to discuss trade secrets, understandable, but if you want to share in the forum or the Discord chat, I'd love to know more - thanks!)

6/8/24, 1:29 PM
@HypnoMutt Lol. The only problem with revealing the 'magic' behind my writing process is revealing that there isn't much magic. Like most of my stories, this one started as late-night or early-morning daydreams. The stories I tell myself before I go to bed or as I'm waking up. I mentally wrote and re-wrote key scenes and hot scenes (initial wishes, Tyler + Brian's first sex scene, Joe + Noah's endless sex, the Brits in the bathroom, a few others like the ending) countless times just in my head. Then, when I decided to actually start writing it down instead of daydreaming about it, I created a notes file in Google where I fleshed out character names (everyone is nameless in my head until I start writing) and created a day-by-day wish tracker. I wrote down every day and every character's name, and I knew, based on the ending, which wishes *needed* to happen. The initial horny/uninhibited/gay/obedience/knowledge wishes, Joe's wish for endless sex as an excuse for them to not immediately reverse the gay wish, Tyler's wish for Javi to have a physical form this chapter, a few more to come. Then I filled in the blanks in my list with fun and sometimes-twisted sex wishes I wanted to write into scenes. Then I filled in the scenes. Several of my favorite scenes were not planned and happened organically. The initial Mateo and Ramon scene with Tyler, for example, was me creating a contrast to how an empathetic person would use the seduction wish vs Brian and the Brits (which I had planned from the start), but then I ended up loving those characters. As I actually wrote the wishes, I replaced my general "Brian wishes to be able to seduce anyone" in my notes with the exact words. Now I just copy/paste that part of my notes to the end of every chapter to share with you guys.

6/11/24, 5:51 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Thanks so much for this insight into your process and for taking the time to write! Very informative - and inspiring :)
6/11/24, 5:14 AM
Thanks man! It's great to have you back. Please, continue. You're a great writer and I really enjoy it.
6/11/24, 4:47 AM
This is awesome.
6/11/24, 4:43 AM
Welcome back! (I guess, since this is my first time reading your story. Just new reader here) Anyway, love the story concept and it is very hot. Hope you continue updating it. Maybe you could add Chris and Will to the mix.
6/11/24, 4:35 AM
What a treat! Surprised that I hadn't seen any of your previous chapters before today.. my good fortune to read them all in one sitting! This is brilliant, I'm hooked. Thank you!
thesaxcat
6/11/24, 1:58 AM
please, please PLEASE keep going!
Anonymous
6/11/24, 1:26 AM
This is exactly the kind of story I would have loved reading back in the old NCMC days. A man taken and ruined by his lust and fantasies, trapped in a prison of his own making as a dumb muscle beast and loving every minute of his degradation and humiliation
Anon Y. Mouse
6/10/24, 10:31 PM
I tried to leave a comment last night and not sure if it went into moderation or it was eaten because I hit the wrong button. I don't usually comment here and I'm trying to do it anonly. In fact I'm a prude who just likes transformation stories, not porn or sex and fiddly bits and such. I also don't like incest stories. (The medieval and fantasy elements helped here... and maybe just because I like wolfmen and minotaurs a bit). But I really enjoyed this, due to the writing and characterization and genuine buildup. I liked the fact that Rudy, the licentious one, seemed more aware of their being corrupted (and reveled in it) than most of the others (including Gil, even at the end). I had my own headcanon of Ruby's ending and turning, which the 50 years future may alter a little, but... After weeks or months or a year, however long it takes, gradual communication from Rudy and Gil plus her own loneliness and isolation... But for Ruby to either just give in or decide to join, apart from death being the only option and the logic that Anon presents, I'm thinking a) Rudolf apologizes for his tirade and accusations, right when Ruby tried to tell him he was still the man she loved underneath it all... It was the rage and exhiliration and lust and anger, and even though corrupted and enjoying it, Rudy assesses himself and that Ruby's not wrong, he does still love her tenderly... and Gilbert realizes that turning her right away as he planned wouldn't have been allowing her the agency which he himself had been granted by his brothers, to make the call. Whatever the outcome after, I feel like that would have been part of it... and then because I don't and can't write the explicit sex stuff, I just picture sloppy cartoony wolfish triple kissing with tongues or whatever.

Pcm
6/11/24, 12:57 AM
@Anon Y. Mouse Yes, it is somewhat sifficult searching for transformation stories without erotic elements. I tgink something has to do with the completion of bodily change is likened to orgasm or such. Yeah, Rudy is always horny. I think he likes seeing his father and brothers becoming as horny as he is. Gil himself felt that he was doing "the right thing" at the moment, so you can say that he was somewhat oblivious to the insidious nature of his corruption. I'm genuinely surprised that people are rooting for Ruby to get her happy ending! Thabk you for following my work!
Anon
6/10/24, 3:42 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) It is highly likely and possible. While the eagles seem to have been eastern immigrants into the west, even if the house was sacked- gil likely wasn't the only survivor- ruby is right there. If there were others looking for him alongside ruby, they'd likely run into him. However, this likely would have ceased after the disastrous knight expedition and the mass shifts. At that point they'd likely mark both as being dead in all but name. Though during the truce period when the diplomat went, some others may have followed in later years. I can however see that any survivors might be looked upon with suspicion in the west as the outbreaks spread and anti-western sentiments in the east grew, and they may have fled west as a result. Others however might only redouble their loyalty to the east in vengeance against the fall of their house, or would have fled both regions entirely. The coasts seem to have issues with the abyss folk, and forests might wind up arboreal hostpots. I can easily see some as the outbreaks spread fleeing to the mountains or deserts or underground- extremely remote, hostile areas- to survive. These folk would likely be amongst the last humans in the region- living increasingly secretive lives, becoming legends in their own right. It one goes with the possibility ruby gets converted, I can easily see her essentially working as the pr branch to lure in more easterners.

Pcm
6/10/24, 4:33 PM
@Anon Yes, just as how the transformation is appealing to us readers, there must be characters in the story who see their corruption as liberation as walk towards it willinglym. There might even be those who decide to willinglu bring themselves and thode around them into the grasp of corruption without their consent. I, however, would say that since the Primal Beast's corruption after the Gil's surrender is instantaneous, there would be no man in the West who was willing to resist the transformation left, so the bleak scene you mentioned might not happen. After the West has turned, there are stray Easterners who submit themselves to the west like you mentioned. Lacking the primal beast's blood, they cannot be turned instantaneously until they have built up a relationship and allegiance to the west, like the diplomat, the process that could take up to decades. Their beastification is the ultimate reward for their patience. Your characterization of Gil and Ruby is exactly how I want to depict him in his later years. He is still the same loving person deep down, but has become sarker, more manipulative, and ruthless. He is always eager to see easterners joining them voluntarily, as he himseld had. Let's see how badly daniel will spiral.... Maybe if he is so vigilant with maintaining "humanity", the faction under his care may be so vigorously altered until they too become undenuably "corrupted".

6/10/24, 4:36 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) good point, I do see daniel, if is is caught by the demons, becoming Warth demon, and if is is caught by the beastmen, what house would want him?

Pcm
6/11/24, 12:48 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) He might spin-off into his own faction 😀. I doubt either the demons or the beastmen would want to make him join at the moment. He did do bad things to Collin and allow Collin to steal Aaron. Maybe if Gil got Aaron back, he would allow Daniel to join the Wolfmen? He was somewhat close to the man before, after all.

6/11/24, 12:53 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) so, he is not in the priority list right now, I wonder what gil feels for Aaron?, now that he is free from his influence, also what would William feel about the beastmen once he finds out they are the reason for Colin's "death"?
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6/10/24, 10:47 PM
This was so hot. I want more.