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6/8/24, 10:28 PM
I don't have as much fondness for this story as the other commentors. It's a rather tragic tale IMO, and the abuse Anthony suffers at the hands of the farmhands is really sad and somewhat painful reading. I have no problem with the general premise of the story; just the cruelty that comes with this decision is rather problematic in my book.

Anonymous
6/9/24, 8:17 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Not to mention it’s written by ChatGPT

6/10/24, 2:52 AM
@Anonymous Well, that's just rude!!! You can use ChatGPT to help write a story, but you should announce that up front. Otherwise, it's rude to not announce that fact!!!
6/10/24, 2:44 AM
Welcome back!! Glad to see you writing again!!! I like the story but I keep thinking back to the cartoons that do the same thing, particularly the _Cold Slither_ episode of GI Joe and Sharon Apple in _Macross Plus_. So, for me, those come to mind and I can't help but compare and go with those stories. But it is good to see you working in a universe and there are lessons for me to learn.
thesaxcat
6/10/24, 12:12 AM
really hope there is a part 3!
Noname
6/9/24, 10:16 PM
TBH I would love that exchange. Even with the downsides I wouldn't mind it.
6/9/24, 10:14 PM
Awesome
6/9/24, 10:03 PM
Great ride! Though I feel for the band having to fuck all those dudes in the audience...
6/9/24, 9:45 PM
Awesome
6/9/24, 9:19 PM
Great chapter. It is nice to see the difference with someone "evil" and someone with conscience about seducing and body manipulation. Tyley and Joe asking for consent when they are changing someone. Brian really gets into my nerve. You, Naedre, written the perfecg villain to hate on. Im now worried with what Asisasion mentioned, with Riley trying to seduce either Noah or Joe. I really hope this two couple is smart to not to fall to Rileys seduction. And about this two, i enjoy reading how their relationship develops. Friends to Fuck Buddies and to hopefully Lovers. I now wonder how will Javi affect the story. I love the bond/relationship of Tyler and Javi before, but im not sure how it will be now that Javi have a human manifestation. But im still rooting for Tyler and Riley though. Also, Brian better have his comeuppance or i will riot. (Just Kidding, unless). I hope Riley's "master" wish wording comes in play for Brians downfall.
Anonymous
6/9/24, 8:57 PM
Loved it :)
6/9/24, 8:45 PM
Hot story - though I have to say I’m glad they’re not the Donnie Boys!