Recent Comments

gdlosh13@gmail.com
6/10/24, 11:56 AM
Such a great story. Too bad that couldn't happen in reality. Lol.
6/10/24, 7:02 AM
A Norismo stories as we like them. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I was wondering while reading chapter 1 if it was a Odyssey lotus, that Mr. Hatch's lotus resort universe (they have cool art on twitter or Tumblr) or something else. Seems we're going the Percy Jackson road.:eyes:

6/10/24, 9:09 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I'm not familiar with Mr Hatch, i'll need to check this out!
6/10/24, 7:42 AM
How devious! I love it!
6/10/24, 3:41 AM
Oh my gosh!! 😍😍😍😍
Anonymous
6/10/24, 2:56 AM
This was wonderful! I cant wait for the next chapter! Cheers! - Xackery
6/8/24, 10:28 PM
I don't have as much fondness for this story as the other commentors. It's a rather tragic tale IMO, and the abuse Anthony suffers at the hands of the farmhands is really sad and somewhat painful reading. I have no problem with the general premise of the story; just the cruelty that comes with this decision is rather problematic in my book.

Anonymous
6/9/24, 8:17 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Not to mention it’s written by ChatGPT

6/10/24, 2:52 AM
@Anonymous Well, that's just rude!!! You can use ChatGPT to help write a story, but you should announce that up front. Otherwise, it's rude to not announce that fact!!!
6/10/24, 2:44 AM
Welcome back!! Glad to see you writing again!!! I like the story but I keep thinking back to the cartoons that do the same thing, particularly the _Cold Slither_ episode of GI Joe and Sharon Apple in _Macross Plus_. So, for me, those come to mind and I can't help but compare and go with those stories. But it is good to see you working in a universe and there are lessons for me to learn.
thesaxcat
6/10/24, 12:12 AM
really hope there is a part 3!
Noname
6/9/24, 10:16 PM
TBH I would love that exchange. Even with the downsides I wouldn't mind it.