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6/10/24, 1:51 PM
Fuck I love the concept, hope to see some more of these (or a continuation, both would be great) :)
6/8/24, 1:52 AM
Maybe I missed it, but I don’t think Tyler ever told Joe and Noah that Ryley’s cum is addicted. They only have a majority vote by one, so my prediction is Joe or Noah will accidentally make the error or becoming Ryley’s cum addict and tip the scale in Brian’s favour. I’m thinking this because Noah said Joe was addicted to his cock, which might be foreshadowing. I’m guessing Joe will become addicted to Ryley’s cock and Brian will use and abuse that which will break Noah’s spirit (or worse). But I’m also not worried about Javi’s physical body being an issue. The wording of the wish was that Javi COULD (not must) create a human body for himself, therefore implying Javi could uncreate it at a moments notice. With the omnipresent powers of knowing Brian’s scheme, Javi will know the moment something goes south and can just pop its body out of existence. All Tyler’s wish did was give Javi the ability to create a physical body for itself, not tie itself to a new physical body.

Pax
6/8/24, 4:45 AM
@[Asisasio](/user/show/128107) Noah could just remove the physiological effects of any addiction though with his ability to shape Joe during sex.

6/8/24, 4:11 PM
@[Pax](/user/show/10006579) Not if Brian has the majority votes cast against them before that can happen

6/9/24, 6:17 PM
@[Asisasio](/user/show/128107) Why did you have to put this idea in me? Now im worried. I dont want Brian, who is the antagonist, to win or at least have the power during the climax of the story. Gonna stress now with this idea. Noooo.

6/10/24, 1:27 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I think that's what @Naedre is building up to. Otherwise he wouldn't have left this loophole. I mean, I don't understand why they would even let Brian in after everything he has done and when he specifically decided not to share his wealth wish with them.
thesaxcat
6/10/24, 12:37 PM
I really wish this would come back.
gdlosh13@gmail.com
6/10/24, 11:56 AM
Such a great story. Too bad that couldn't happen in reality. Lol.
6/10/24, 7:02 AM
A Norismo stories as we like them. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I was wondering while reading chapter 1 if it was a Odyssey lotus, that Mr. Hatch's lotus resort universe (they have cool art on twitter or Tumblr) or something else. Seems we're going the Percy Jackson road.:eyes:

6/10/24, 9:09 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I'm not familiar with Mr Hatch, i'll need to check this out!
6/10/24, 7:42 AM
How devious! I love it!
6/10/24, 3:41 AM
Oh my gosh!! 😍😍😍😍
Anonymous
6/10/24, 2:56 AM
This was wonderful! I cant wait for the next chapter! Cheers! - Xackery
6/8/24, 10:28 PM
I don't have as much fondness for this story as the other commentors. It's a rather tragic tale IMO, and the abuse Anthony suffers at the hands of the farmhands is really sad and somewhat painful reading. I have no problem with the general premise of the story; just the cruelty that comes with this decision is rather problematic in my book.

Anonymous
6/9/24, 8:17 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Not to mention it’s written by ChatGPT

6/10/24, 2:52 AM
@Anonymous Well, that's just rude!!! You can use ChatGPT to help write a story, but you should announce that up front. Otherwise, it's rude to not announce that fact!!!