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6/9/24, 9:45 PM
Awesome
6/9/24, 9:19 PM
Great chapter. It is nice to see the difference with someone "evil" and someone with conscience about seducing and body manipulation. Tyley and Joe asking for consent when they are changing someone. Brian really gets into my nerve. You, Naedre, written the perfecg villain to hate on. Im now worried with what Asisasion mentioned, with Riley trying to seduce either Noah or Joe. I really hope this two couple is smart to not to fall to Rileys seduction. And about this two, i enjoy reading how their relationship develops. Friends to Fuck Buddies and to hopefully Lovers. I now wonder how will Javi affect the story. I love the bond/relationship of Tyler and Javi before, but im not sure how it will be now that Javi have a human manifestation. But im still rooting for Tyler and Riley though. Also, Brian better have his comeuppance or i will riot. (Just Kidding, unless). I hope Riley's "master" wish wording comes in play for Brians downfall.
Anonymous
6/9/24, 8:57 PM
Loved it :)
6/9/24, 8:45 PM
Hot story - though I have to say I’m glad they’re not the Donnie Boys!
Zander
6/9/24, 8:39 PM
Thanks for the new chapter). The story is super erotic which I like. But I feel sorry for Evan most of all in the story because he became a Toy in the hands of Eros, and he clearly did not want to rape Billy and Shazam and make him his boyfriend by force. But the power of his penis changed his brains and affects his personality. I wonder if Aphrodite will be happy with this because she is the Goddess of love and she is unlikely to tolerate love under duress. I hope the new chapter will be out soon
6/9/24, 8:35 PM
Please add more This is amazing
6/9/24, 7:31 PM
Absolutely superb story! 10/10 Would love to see where this goes x
Anonymous
6/9/24, 5:27 PM
This SOOO needs a sequel
6/9/24, 3:30 PM
Super hot story!!!!

6/9/24, 4:50 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks!
2/15/24, 7:26 AM
I was following this along. I wanted so much at certain places for some enhancements, but it was well written. Chapter two might add the depth I am wanting... and hope you see a plot developing some day... I can, I can see the sub exercising mind control tapes on the Alpha to shape Him into a better Alpha with a a slower build to a progression into Alpha/sub with the Alpha not having the girlfriend available for a month while she was out of the country and him coming home drunk too many nights in a row. More from there over the months with Dan no longer paying rent or bills but daily and twice daily oral when that sneaks in. Buddy service would be the final chapter to me.

6/9/24, 4:30 PM
@[Subby Tubby](/user/show/10047269) There are a couple of chapters on my Patreon from my story "Pegged" that I'm hoping will eventually end up more like this. There is also a second chapter of this story, and I've been working on a third, but I'm not sure it's going quite how you described here.