I would love to see what happens next!!! Very Hot!

I'm going to preface this comment by saying that the writing is AMAZING. You're a fantastic author and have immense skill in characterization, scene-setting, and general ability. So nothing about this is personal! :) All that said...welp, it's official. You've written one of the WORST characters I have ever read on this site, and that's saying something! :p But seriously, you've crafted a perfectly detestable villain in Brian. As I said in my comment on the last chapter, he has no excuse for himself--no parental upbringing, no traumatic event in his childhood, no history of powerlessness that makes him seek power. He just genuinely believes that he, as an "alpha," deserves to be on top, and everyone else needs to be beneath him. You brilliantly capture that at the chapter's end--he has a room full of people who will literally do *anything* for him (nice job on calling them "toys!"), and yet the idea that there are three people who won't is enough to make him furious and ruin his fun. It's not enough to have 99.99% of the world in his hand--the notion that a single .01% exists that isn't his is an offense. Having him outright state that he views caring, empathy, and compassion as weaknesses makes him a clear-cut sociopath--one who only cares about himself and experiences nothing for others. And I don't enjoy reading about characters like that. That leads me into my next point: sad to say that while I appreciated the chapter--and the story overall--I didn't *enjoy* it (I confess that I skimmed through most of the sex scenes because the humiliation made me deeply uncomfortable, and the plot elements--especially the set-up at the end of the chapter--also made me unhappy). Speaking frankly, I don't enjoy reading about smug, entitled pricks getting whatever they want; I see too much of that in everyday life. I'm glad that you left a few beacons (good pun!) of hope--perhaps the House will be able to communicate what happened to Tyler (since his initial wish is to "know what's going on"), and as @Drawningghle said, the phrasing of Riley's wish being "my master" suggests that if someone else wishes to take that role, they'll gain invulnerability. But if I may make predictions: I foresee Noah and Joe being tricked into Brian's trap via Riley's altered body, setting up a final confrontation between Tyler and Brian where the former has to make a tough choice (maybe wishing for Riley to become his own slave). I'm aware of my own tastes enough to know that the true disgust that Brian has created for me makes me unlikely to read the rest of the story, at least until I know there's a happy ending involved. It's a testament to just how good you are that you can keep us all hanging! Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Thank you for an excellent story and character study on sociopathy and selfishness. You're an amazing author, Naedre, and you've captivated a lot of people on this site in a way I haven't seen in a long time. Congratulations to you! Even if I don't end up finishing the story, you've made a lot of people happy, gotten a lot of people talking, and sparked a lot of conversations. And I think that that's what the best stories do! :)

Come for the wolfmen muscle growth, stay for the touching story of alienation, the harms of nationalism and racial purity, found family, and familial love (some of which is incest). The themes of the story were really well executed in this chapter; you should be proud. While I have mixed feelings about the ending and how i feel it kind of undercuts the themes i mentioned above, the first two thirds are so well written and moving that it doesn't really matter. Great job.

Terrific

that was a very fun ride thanks for sharing it

Such an awesome hot story! I hope you write more stories like this with leather and role reversal!

A simple idea, really well executed. So hot! Made me cum hard. I wonder if we’ll have more from Sir and his slave.

I love this thank you!

Awesome Story Sir, thank you!

Just read this and can’t wait for the next update