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6/5/24, 5:44 AM
Hahaha you got me with that one
6/5/24, 2:22 AM
I thought I was good, thank you, Sir, for a most humbling experience.
6/4/24, 10:34 PM
Very sexy: making the hypnotist an unwitting participant was unparalleled.
Anonymous
6/4/24, 8:00 PM
Gotta agree with the comments above. This is an incredible hot and well written story. The gradual transition is really appealing. Great work!
6/4/24, 4:45 PM
Mmmm, sign me up please. Giggles
6/2/24, 1:18 PM
This is superbly written, captivating, with amazingly deep characters and a world that feels real and lived in. Not to mention absolutely smolderingly hot! Its the kind of writing I'd expect from a New York Times Bestseller. I'm over the moon with how gripping this story is, as well as inspired and hoping to learn from this story so as to incorporate this level of craftsmenship into my own writing. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

6/4/24, 3:35 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I wasn't expecting to log on today and see a comment with this high a praise, especially when i wasn't 100% confident with this chapter. Thanks for keepong me interested in pursuing this story Kyle, I'm glad you're enjoyong it!
Pcm
6/4/24, 3:15 PM
The gradual mental transformation is very well done! I like how Bruce slowly reverts from his confident self into a pliable good boy eager to obey and become like his daddy. The growing obliviousness as Bruce grows adore Grodd as his father is hot. The final completr loss of his humanity is the perfect way to cap off the story. Too bad that the new father and son never got to have a sexy time together.

6/4/24, 3:28 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Oh my gosh, thank you so much! :star_struck: I really did try to incorporate a style that could intimately detail the process of Bruce becoming mentally dominated and tried a crack at emulating Swizzington's style of expanded visual metaphor. As for the ending, I appreciate that you liked it! It's the roughest part, for sure, and I've been told by a few people that it could've taken another go. Honestly, I'd love to write a continuation some time to smooth it out and maybe add that "sexy time" :wink: if I get commissioned for it some day!

Pcm
6/4/24, 3:34 PM
@[Tom Gungy](/user/show/129727) I know that this is a commissoned work, but it really is too bad that the story won't be continued otherwise. It would be so hot for the new 'Bruce' to help his new father convert the Robins ( who are his sons, adopted and blood) into other Gorillas for their family. Maybe they could become his new little brothers? Bruce could help them diaper up. Or maybe Grodd could become a proud grandpa 1after all....
6/4/24, 2:51 PM
Wow! Always love reading stories where the big guy falls into submission. The pacing was kept it going. And how is submission was like a constant haze over his mind. Or how his only thoughts were of his new Master. His new gear suits him well. Though may I recommend having Mark in some rubber. If leather is for doms, then rubber and latex are for subs and slaves. Plus seeing his muscled body outlined in that stuff would be hawt. But either way, please keep going if you can.
Jun 3, 2024
Anonymous
6/4/24, 1:40 PM
You should continue this series but have the main character go through the app’s “introduction” and maybe have someone Zonk him

6/4/24, 1:45 PM
@Anonymous I'm down to write whatever I'm commissioned for! I certainly wouldn't mind adding to this one. I had a lot of fun with it!