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6/4/24, 11:13 AM
Great scene! Hope for more.
Alfred Mcgee
6/4/24, 1:52 AM
Do you have any plans to make some type of series? It would be amazing if the predator into a relationship with someone they could digest over and over and over again Leave

6/4/24, 9:12 AM
@Alfred Mcgee I have plans for a third chapter, but it will take some time to come out!
6/4/24, 6:02 AM
I have reread this epic; it gets better with multiple readings. I can hardly wait for the story's continuation.
6/4/24, 5:40 AM
I personally love how gross a character Brian is. That being said it would be a crime against humanity if he doesn’t get fucked in the ass at some point. oh how humiliating it will be for him.
Anonymous
5/31/24, 8:12 AM
Neptune is the Roman name for Poseidon which is a Greek name. Zeus is the Greek name for Jupiter in the Roman mythology. Mixing both is quite disturbing

6/4/24, 4:59 AM
@Anonymous And Shazam is an acronym for Solomon, Hercules, Atlas, Zeus, Achilles, and Mercury. I wouldn’t worry about it too much if the names of the gods used for the acronym are also mixed Greek & Roman.
Sss
6/4/24, 4:57 AM
Hey, I recommend that you publish each part of your story separately. That gives more people a chance to see it.
6/4/24, 4:22 AM
Absolutely arousing. I love the Bob/Adam interactions and climax (in more than one way) was sensational. Need a pair of those pig-producing underwear garments. 🐽
6/4/24, 4:12 AM
Tremendous writing. The pacing is brilliant and the concept is fantastic. The ease with which Rob 'identifies' Mark as not really a dom and the arousal and tension that creates in the crowd. Their probably asking themselves whether it just Mark's true nature he'd been putting on an act to hide, or if Rob had made him into a sub. The gradual succumbing to it, that he doesn't even hear the advice for doms because he's not one any more was genius. Combining it with an appreciation from leather is also nicely done and gives it an extra layer. This is erotic and hot, incredible work!
6/4/24, 4:09 AM
I was hooked from the very beginning! So good.
6/4/24, 3:07 AM
Amazing work, super hot