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5/27/24, 5:31 AM
Sexy and lighthearted, and wonderfully capturing the allure or porn scripts. And it’s fun to be in the head of a roleplayer, walking that rope between cheesy acting and keeping the horniness up. Great job, really. And thanks so much for gifting us with your stories

6/3/24, 12:50 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I appreciate every time you comment! It feels good to have almost a “regular” who sees a Soren Fitz story and knows “oh yeah that’s gonna be fun,” heh, and comments are always a gift to me. But yeah, getting into the head of a roleplayer was a blast. Time taught me a lot about that mindset so I could write this, and I felt like it added something really fun, interesting, and unique to the scene that I hoped would make it possibly more immersive than even pure porn logic, because there was a reason for the top’s surreal dialogue and actions. Glad it was fun!
5/25/24, 9:02 PM
Another outstanding work, Soren! You nailed that almost-otherworldly fantasy vibe that porn provides that we all buy into, the suspension of disbelief and just rolling with it. Concurred with some of the other commenters - great pick of references, you have good taste! Can't wait to see what other porny scenarios you can think up, and I'll be there to read 'em! ;)

6/3/24, 12:45 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, it’s the “rolling with it” that was so vital to the fantasy here. As long as Marco, the POV, acts like the situation is normal, so can the readers—and even the little “shocks to the system” where the fantasy is revealed to be just a roleplay don’t have to affect that feeling of normality. As easily as you can pause your porn vid and respond to a message on your phone, so you can step out of the fantasy for a moment and then step back in.
5/25/24, 7:24 AM
Loved this, but especially the back and forth erotic plumber talk and that Marco’s reference model is the sexy, bubble butt, big titty Jess Mesino himself! Always imagined Mesino (Marco) having his pipes pumped full of cum, but this was a nice change of pace!

6/3/24, 12:39 PM
@[Sky Larkin](/user/show/10011200) I don’t know why but Jess Mesino just has this really great _dad_ vibe that I felt could really get him into a dom mood! I def think his ass deserves to be used, maybe by his young blond trainee. Not sure which POV to write that from, though. Glad you enjoyed the dialogue, too! I worked really hard on it. Before Time’s help, it was basically one singular metaphor about clogged pipes that got boring and old fast, but I was able to diversify it a lot more in the end.
5/23/24, 6:21 PM
There is nothing I love more than self-aware/meta porn, something that plays with expectations. This story was pure porny filth but lighthearted. It's probably one of your most "pure" stories, in that you can easily understand the premise right away and fall into the fantasy. VERY hot too, to kind of "peel back the curtain" and see the way an RP scenario works. Marco is HOT (LOVE the inspo), but I do hope that he gets that fat assed fucked at some point. Can't wait for more!

6/3/24, 12:34 PM
@[Charlie Walker](/user/show/1052782) Yeah! One of the really fun parts of writing this story for me was being able to write it as an in-world roleplay and yet enable the readers to settle into the porny fantasy anyway. It’s like, an almost double-layered fantasy too, because you can accept whichever premise you want: this is a casual sex world where you can have sex with anyone at any time, or this is a porn logic world where your plumber will fuck you instead of fix your pipes. Or both! I’m also glad you found “peeling back the curtain” hot. I find it fundamentally pretty hot to see how people roleplay, exchange consent, talk about what they want to do… just feels natural and real, but also scorching for some reason? Couldn’t say why, but it’s clearly shared!
6/3/24, 12:16 PM
Waitingcto see where this goes, but this got me quite hard :wink:
6/3/24, 10:52 AM
Love the start of this series
6/2/24, 11:48 PM
You gotta add line breaks babe

6/3/24, 10:36 AM
@[ganymedesJockstrap](/user/show/10002453) I noticed the formatting got effed after it was published, but I edited the chapter to display correctly. Do you still see it as wall of text?
Jun 2, 2024
6/3/24, 9:44 AM
I’m a huge fan of cock shrink stories. I hope there will be more.
6/3/24, 6:14 AM
I think Gil should succumb and through him joining the workmen the other Easterners would be able to join them too

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6/3/24, 8:46 AM
@[luisadjani](/user/show/971980) Thank you for the comment! Tge next chapter is now awaiting approval, so I guess we will see about that soon!
6/3/24, 1:02 AM
Mister Johnson is really slipping into a big himbo DILF slut mindset and loving it. I am also loving it. I love his relationship with Pieter and how open they are to enjoying themselves with others as well. That they'd been dating for ages and he hadn't realised it was cute. Such a doofus. It feels like Sam is easing him towards more, too. In general but also how Sam is in charge. It was great that Carl put two and two together that his dad was working for Sam. Speaking of Carl, his turning up and being gay, let alone his boyfriend dominating them both was very hot. He couldn't stop himself from crossing the line into that taboo. He's become quite the muscled cock addict. The way the Ahmed talked about Carl in that lewd and degrading way was really arousing. Pieter knowing what had happened, what with the evidence, and then slipping his cock into that used hole was a great ending too. I really love this series. Thank you for writing more chapters for it. I can't wait to see where you take it.

6/3/24, 6:20 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Hmmm... I think you liked it! So glad you did... I was actually gunna finish the story there, but... inspiration struct and there's definitely more to cum ) inside Mr Johnson)

6/3/24, 6:28 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) Oh, I DID. A lot. I shall endeavour to be less vague next time. Heh. He has come and cum a long way, it could end there. I am thrilled there's at least one more chapter coming thanks to inspiration. Can't wait! I think Mr. Johnson and the readers both would be happy with more cumming (inside him).

6/3/24, 6:57 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Awesome. I feel like each chapter should generate at least three loads from a reader... that's the goal. And Mr Johnson is certainly enjoying it. Being a himbo certainly beats having to go to the office every day

6/3/24, 7:03 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) At least. Oh, definitely. Beats the office for sure. He's really lucked into a new career. Two really. He makes it look like a lot of fun. Especially when he has such great guys around him to encourage him to be the best himbo he can be.

6/3/24, 7:05 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Hey, if you wanna chat more, message me at @gayjockgeek on X. Always happy to chat about horny stuff there