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Zander
6/3/24, 2:30 AM
Thanks for the continuation. Interestingly, he will hypnotize other fathers of the bully's friends (who bullied him). And why did the spiral suddenly appear on the TV? Someone wanted to secretly hypnotize Mr. Ed, but Matt happened to be nearby and took advantage of Ed's hypnotic state. If there really is someone behind this, will he confront Matt because he has found out everything and can challenge him (probably he doesn’t want a competitor in the form of Matt), which would be logical. Because two hypnotists cannot coexist together. One last question, was Ed himself the original target or was it his son? because he usually stayed with his father during the holidays, but this year the plans suddenly changed and he left? Or were both father and son the target? There are many questions that need to be answered. And let's hope the answer won't take too long (and the new chapter will be out soon)
Jun 2, 2024
6/3/24, 2:19 AM
Great first story. I think it has all the makings of a series potentially. Really love how you shrink big dicks bro. Keep it up.
Hyphyno
6/3/24, 1:35 AM
I'm glad to see more of this series. The first chapter was so hot, and this one certainly did not disappoint. I'm curious to see who the next team will be, wrestlers maybe?
6/3/24, 1:26 AM
The strong command in tone with the benevolent ritualistic and spiritual made this a great read
6/3/24, 12:54 AM
Great start, and a very interesting setup for a continuation, I always love stories where the bad guys are always ahead, can’t wait for the Prince to join the King, they would probably make a great duo of slaves
Anonymous
6/2/24, 10:40 PM
This story was extra interesting for me since I'm a First Officer on the real life Breeze Airways :laughing:
Jun 2, 2024
6/2/24, 10:13 PM
Jealous of Jake and our protagonist. Love the idea of being molded and then fucked with your own cock.
Jake
6/2/24, 9:11 PM
This is a great start! Exited for the next part.
Jun 2, 2024
6/2/24, 8:31 PM
Awesome first submission! I love a good cock shrink story.
Zander
6/2/24, 7:12 PM
By the way, it would make an interesting story. Plot: A character who was brainwashed and sold into slavery, destroying his life and family. By chance, he somehow regains his memory and control over himself and begins to take revenge on everyone who was behind the destruction of his life. He looks for this hypnotist, destroys his mind and, instead of killing him, sells him into slavery. At the same time, he makes sure that this person (who destroyed his life) understands everything that is happening to him in slavery and suffers until the end of his days. Like Kill Bill)