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Antoine
6/2/24, 12:36 PM
I am a male pec and nipple connoisseur whom can’t get enough of hot pec stories
Anonymous
6/2/24, 12:33 PM
That was an awesome hot homoerotic story
6/2/24, 12:03 PM
i loved this story. It was so exciting and I loved how he was so muscular and manly... and his parts were so orgasm-filled. Your storytelling is next-level! THANK YOU

6/2/24, 12:23 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! One of my favourite stories I've ever written. Hope you enjoy my other stories too
6/2/24, 7:43 AM
I must be one of the few that's rooting for Brian. Yes - he's awful but at the same time, the control and power he's wielding is really hot! One question though @Naedre: you seem to have it in for Brits. Bad experience?

6/2/24, 8:21 AM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Hah, I have nothing but love for Brits in general. British tourists in Spain? The setting is inspired by a real town I visited pre-COVID (and pre-Brexit.) I do have a vivid memory of a bunch of drunk British girls trying to start a fight with me and my gay friends because the late-night food place we all ended up at ran out of fries/“chips.”

6/2/24, 8:49 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Ugh, that sucks. I live in Essex so I can definitely empathise with the situation you ended up in!
6/2/24, 8:09 AM
If Brian wins in the end we riot :rofl: You've crafted a wonderful villain, he's just a bad person, seemingly utterly beyond redemption. Pride comes before the fall methinks. Delighted to hear there are more chapter coming. And as an approver i get to read them just that little bit earlier!
tim
6/2/24, 7:34 AM
the thoughts infiltrating Edwin‘a mind are so hot… can’t wait to hear him smelling and smoking his alpha cigar…
tim
6/2/24, 7:21 AM
I love how the Alpha cigar find its true owner… so hot!!!
mllmllmll
6/2/24, 6:24 AM
genuinely fucking incredible. Immaculate, from grammar down to the plot itself. I have never felt the urge to comment until now. Looking forward to savoring the rest!
6/2/24, 6:07 AM
I mean, I detest Brian same as everyone else; but I love your writing. Thus, with 6 more chapters to go I say bring on the corruption and ramp up the perversion. Also I would love to see the chapters get posted quicker then since you are almost done writing it and I am super excited in multiple ways to read more and more of your incredible writing. 😉
6/1/24, 5:27 AM
So happy another chapter is out! Can't wait for Act 2! Favorite trigger so far has gotta be the pec flex. Fight song is pretty creative though!

6/2/24, 5:10 AM
@[FlufferGuy](/user/show/10050310) Glad you liked it! My favorite scene personally is in the next chapter, so I hope you like it. And don't worry, I have more future plans for Ray and his amazing pecs.

Anonymous
6/2/24, 5:40 AM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) So glad to hear there will be more of his pecs coming up.